I Feel

Melody SJAL on Nov 9, 2008

Tags: alone, feather, feelings, light as a feather, love, pure love, tree

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What I feel when I am with you.

I feel light

As a feather –

Floating

Dancing

Soaring

Whenever

We’re together

Alone

At peace

Happy

I feel lofty

As a tall tree -

Towering

Commanding

Awe-inspiring

Whenever

Your love shines through

Brightly

Purely

Truly

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Comments (15)

nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 9, 2008
so lovely
Blue Buttefly on Nov 9, 2008
I’m lovin’ it!
Bernadette Louise on Nov 9, 2008
Beautiful
goodselfme on Nov 9, 2008
Pretty, uplifting and cheerful. thank you, friend.
Debbie Mann on Nov 9, 2008
Well put. A very sweet poem, Melody!
papaleng on Nov 9, 2008
wow you have widen your writing style but have the same result, good poem.. BTW do take some rest.. it will help you a lot.
Joie Schmidt on Nov 9, 2008
I love the interesting structure of this poem – it makes me feel like I’m floating in light airy clouds!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Darla Smith on Nov 9, 2008
Great poem!
Oh yeahh on Nov 9, 2008
This is just awesome…
very beautifully written.
Inna Tysoe on Nov 9, 2008
Nice poem!

Inna
R J Grant on Nov 9, 2008
Simple and yet very meaningful.

Grant
gabbic1219 on Nov 11, 2008
very sweet and love the style,it is different!!
leannehume on Nov 12, 2008
This is great! I love the layout. Well done!
PR Mace on Nov 16, 2008
Lovely flow of words. Nice poem.
clay hurtubise on Jan 26, 2009
Nice, positive piece.
Thanks,
Clay

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