This is a poem I have written. It’s about giving your special one all he/she can imagine.

I give you the sea, a good morning kiss.
I offer you my kisses, my feelings, my life,
and a piece of the sky.

I give you the sea, my intimacy.
I offer you my kisses, the sun, my feelings
and half of the moon even the pencil I’m writing with.
A pass to the moon and my only heart that beats for you
I give you.

I give you my friendship whenever you want.
I give you the time
and made you queen of my heart
to stay not to go away or depart.

I give you my stories exchange for a glance.
Give you the time and made you queen of my heart
And to think that a glance was enough for your eyes to trap my heart.
I give you my force, my body, my everything. I give you.

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  • Linda on Jun 17, 2009

    i’m gonna use this to say it to my husband. lol. thanks love it

  • Mrs M on Jun 17, 2009

    Nice love poem, I have to admit that some of the lines were really good and others I found myself reading over several times. All in all….good job.

  • Mike on Jun 18, 2009

    good poem dude. My girlfriend is crazy with love poem. Keep it up

  • teto6584 on Jun 18, 2009

    es un poema muy lindo. me gustaria leerlo en espanol

  • poet09 on Jun 19, 2009

    Nice write.

  • Sisie on Jun 21, 2009

    wow…good poem…love u

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 21, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • Tito on Jun 21, 2009

    good job man

  • Amanda N Miller on Jun 22, 2009

    I really like this! Thanks for sharing.

  • irishpen on Jun 22, 2009

    What an awesome poem! ;p

  • rutherfranc on Jun 22, 2009

    that was sweet..

  • LoveNFood on Jun 22, 2009

    good poem

  • Francois Hagnere on Jun 22, 2009

    This is very beautiful my friend! I wish you all the best!
    Take care,
    François

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 22, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem,
    very well written!
    Thanks for sharing (:

  • J J Neuman on Jun 22, 2009

    Indefinite love…cool but what do you get in return?

  • Francy on Jun 22, 2009

    It’s not about receiving but about giving.
    The best thing is to give. Why?
    Because it feels better when you do.

    Thanks everybody for commenting…I’ll return the favor.
    Keep sharing.

  • swatilohani on Jun 23, 2009

    cool

  • livemike on Jul 6, 2009

    very powerful stuff..

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