When you talk too much…

I hate you when you smile
“coz you make me feel confused
I hate you when you talk too much
“coz you make me feel conscious
I hate you when I hear your sweet voice
“coz you make me feel uncomfortable
I hate you when you”re out of my sight
“coz you make me feel incomplete
I hate you when I see you everyday
“coz you make me love you so much
I hate you when I can’t sleep
“coz memories of you are still deep
Visions of you is all I can see
Oh! Please, set this feeling free
“coz you didn’t love me through a bit.

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  • Priyanka R on Nov 22, 2008

    Gosh…i loved it…was beautifully written…

  • Mys Lyke Meeh on Nov 22, 2008

    Geez–is that mean—I love you? Hehehe

    Nice!

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