When you talk too much…

I hate you when you smile
‘coz you make me feel confused
I hate you when you talk too much
‘coz you make me feel conscious
I hate you when I hear your sweet voice
‘coz you make me feel uncomfortable
I hate you when you”re out of my sight
‘coz you make me feel incomplete
I hate you when I see you everyday
‘coz you make me love you so much
I hate you when I can’t sleep
‘coz memories of you are still deep
Visions of you is all I can see
Oh! Please, set this feeling free
‘coz you didn’t love me through a bit.

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  • Priyanka R on Nov 22, 2008

    Gosh…i loved it…was beautifully written…

  • Alicia Wind on Nov 22, 2008

    Geez–is that mean—I love you? Hehehe

    Nice!

  • Sarah on Dec 9, 2009

    That was really good.

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