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I Hate You, I Love You

jaysonv on Jan 23, 2010
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I hate everything about you but why do I still love you?

I hate how you broke my heart,

I hate how you tore my soul apart.

I hate when you said you cared for me,

I hate when you said you loved me.

I hate despite of the pain I still care,

I hate despite of the pain I still love.

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  • AussieSheila on Jan 23, 2010

    Good job. I know how it feels to love and to hate at the same time.

  • Michael Eboh on Jan 23, 2010

    Thanks Jaysonv!

  • jaysonv on Jan 23, 2010

    Thanks Liz. Your always welcome Mochael. :)

  • jaysonv on Jan 23, 2010

    Thanks Liz. Your always welcome Michael.

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 23, 2010

    Lovely poem

  • jaysonv on Jan 23, 2010

    Thanks Liz. Your always welcome Michael. :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 23, 2010

    hate not love only hatred will vanish and love will flourish gr888888888888888

  • Sushant94 on Jan 23, 2010

    Oh my god! this is awesome!

  • willie wondka on Jan 23, 2010

    its love, you hate them for what they have done, but you cant help but love them as well thats love for you.
    I like this poem of yours, great. x

  • Atanacio on Jan 23, 2010

    hate and love Jason is like night and day, cold and hot Good entry

  • chitragopi on Jan 23, 2010

    Short, yet profound.

  • dipz091412 on Jan 23, 2010

    nice write

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 23, 2010

    It’s said that love and hate are two sides of the same coin. I believe it.

  • jaysonv on Jan 23, 2010

    Thanks for all your compliment guys.. I appreciated it.. Thank You!

  • johnnydod on Jan 23, 2010

    there is a fine line between love and hate

  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 23, 2010

    You captured both love and hate well in this wonderful write

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 23, 2010

    Thanks for that.

    Inna

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 23, 2010

    Hate and Love go hand in hand. You don’t hate the person, but you hate their actions. They cause you pain because you did love them. It’s incredible how someone can feel both emotions and the same time, but yes, it is possible.

    Great poem.

  • jesse lennon on Jan 23, 2010

    Awwe!
    I want more!
    Its very lovely!

  • alensmith on Jan 23, 2010

    great article mind blowing thanks for sharing and thanks for ur reply also what i will find in my post

  • Videomark on Jan 23, 2010

    Sometimes we hate the fact that we stll love someone.

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Jan 23, 2010

    My mother always said, “It is not that I don’t love you; it’s the things you DO that I don’t love. Good poem.

  • live and lovin life on Jan 23, 2010

    Awww… that’s sad but beautifully written…….

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 23, 2010

    ur poem is so much loved

    i wonder how many more

    will cross ur poem

    if u wrote only

    about LOVE

    GR888888888888888888
    LH

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 23, 2010

    Yeah pretty much you and I had or have the same love hate relationship :)

  • Carol M Creasey on Jan 23, 2010

    Well done, love and hate, two opposite extremes.

  • standingproud on Jan 23, 2010

    hurt turns to hate,
    but love concurs all .

    True one can love you but just not the things you do…

    Lovely put your poem Jayson

  • pattiann on Jan 23, 2010

    Good poem! Thanks for sharing!

  • Sweet girl on Jan 23, 2010

    Nice post.

    Thanks to share this one.

    Pakize

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 23, 2010

    Intense feelings.

  • juggaloob on Jan 23, 2010

    Very nice write, reminds me of my favorite subject to write about, heartbreaks.

  • giftarist on Jan 24, 2010

    It’s like hot and cold. Powerful write

  • albert1jemi on Jan 24, 2010

    excellent write

  • alensmith on Jan 24, 2010

    really very very good one
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  • Darla Cooke on Jan 24, 2010

    I know the feeling very well.

  • LewSethics on Jan 24, 2010

    go Jason

  • patampar on Jan 31, 2010

    its a big boom when love and hate collides

  • singming12 on Feb 9, 2010

    i feel the same way

  • singming12 on Feb 9, 2010

    i know how you feel

  • A Jill Gaebel on Feb 16, 2010

    You’re a pretty good poet, Jayson. I’ve read a couple and found them to be very expressive. They create an emotional response in the reader which makes good poetry and writing Very good. Jill

  • Starpisces on Feb 21, 2010

    i can understand …
    and the opposite of love is not hate.. love and hate can be together, that’s strange but it\’s happening

  • Evelyn M Carter on Feb 26, 2010

    Very nice. Enjoyable read. Love is so tough. Thanks for sharing. :)

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