A poem….

I have been told that you have forgotten about me.

Don’t tell me those truths my sweet love

Because it hurts my heart.

If they told me that you have forgotten about me

It means that you don’t longer love me

Don’t tell me those truths

Because it really hurts.

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If someone has seen me cry

It is because it hurts me.

Don’t tell me those truths

Because….because it hurts.

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  • Nikita K on Sep 1, 2009

    Aw, this poem is so sad and emotional and you’ve put all of your emotions into expressing yourself. Hope it isn’t true!

  • Emma Green on Sep 1, 2009

    Such an emotional poem and the last line really shouted out how much it hurts! Good work!

  • Marie Milton on Sep 1, 2009

    Nice one, thanks for sharing : )

  • alc on Sep 1, 2009

    A great write thanks for the share!

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 1, 2009

    Wonderfully expressed and heartfelt poem!

  • fragile18 on Sep 1, 2009

    truth hurts. hmm. that’s how reality bites.

  • Eunice Tan on Sep 2, 2009

    I agree with what you feel.

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