Just another poem.


 

Marching into the saloon, I have a hair cut

As I want to look neat and smart

The weather is too hot

It’s wiser to keep hair short

I have my hair trimmed

But I did not see any fringe

Male hairdresser, with voice feminine

“Fringe don’t suit you, trust me”

I did not perm hair for years 

as I dislike my hair to have curl

Though I love to eat cauliflower

Broccoli, to go with egg instant noodles

Though I am not young any further 

But I don’t look old, thanks to my mother

After the cut, I look another 10 years younger

Instead of woman, I become an old girl

I keep hair straight as usual

Straight hair is more manageable

Need not apply sculpting lotion or mousse

Yet when comb, I find it so smooth

During those days when I had long hair

I always dropped them though I did haircare

Probably due to hormones deficiency

Or I should take more vitamins

I have many disappointment in my life

Many problems occupy my mind

It’s a miracle, till now I still survive

After the cut, I feel fresh and again I’m alive

Though my hair not very thick

10,000 strands to the ground and he quickly sweeps

But instead of throwing, inside a bag he keeps

Guess he keeps them to make himself a wig

A pair of scissors can do so much

Zig Zag, Zig Zag, that feminine man cut

Cut away my anxiety, worries, but sure bring me luck

As from today, I shall have a brand new start

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  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 6, 2010

    It is always refreshing to have your hair cut. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Francois Hagnere on Sep 6, 2010

    A hair cut and we change all of a sudden. Great poem, as usual.

  • Francois Hagnere on Sep 6, 2010

    A hair cut and we change all of a sudden.
    Great poem, as usual. Thank you.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Sep 6, 2010

    Very nice. We all need to have some haircut… Most of the time. Good poem.

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 6, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • carissimi on Sep 6, 2010

    loved it..!! thanks for your friendship.. i always appreciate your comments.. have a beautiful day!

  • zain0077 on Sep 6, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • Val Mills on Sep 6, 2010

    Lol, the power of a haircut in making us feel younger is amazing.

  • BRENDAKSHELTON on Sep 6, 2010

    Well written and great peom.

  • giftarist on Sep 6, 2010

    Well done, Star.

  • Eunice Tan on Sep 6, 2010

    New look :)

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 7, 2010

    You feel much younger when you get a haircut.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Sep 7, 2010

    Hair today gone tomorrow. Interesting thoughts. So did you tip him before or after?:)

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Sep 8, 2010

    I need to see how you look now.

  • Michal Dorcak on Sep 9, 2010

    Very funny picture and nice poem too.

  • Noeal V on Sep 9, 2010

    Nice poem

  • Noeal V on Sep 9, 2010

    Nice poem and funny

  • gaby7 on Sep 9, 2010

    Nice poem here

  • earthlyjewels on Sep 10, 2010

    I believe a haircut can make or break you. You really do feel like a brand new person after getting your haircut! Thanks for sharing!

  • wonder on Sep 13, 2010

    A great share as usual.

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