I Have Resent That I Have to Present

gabbic1219 on Nov 2, 2008

Tags: analogy, Anger, blue, guard down, heart, prince, red balloons, Tears, toad, words of wisdom

It’s all built up inside, like an angry bull seeing re.

Here i go again, down this lonley road
Tired of such bull crap, my prince has apt to be a toad
Nothing more but hopeless dreams
I hope every tear haunts your every waken dream
I have anger radiating through my wrist
As this write wouldn’t be so nice cause im extremely pissed
A word of wisdom hmmm”let your guard down”
Now look at me this stupid freaking clown
Red balloons look great with clowns
Maybe i’ll carry one every where around
Im to good for this pain,it came at me like heavy rain
Heavy on my heart,who gives a shit,you knew from the start
So maybe i did as well,so why wait until i fell
In love that is…something we we both cherished
Look at us now,hoping the love will perish
Like a fire it will turn to ashes,as they once were whole
No matter how burnt,the soot remains
Sadly but true love burns an eternal flame
I see red from being angered,no red balloon for me
Count me out of your ignorant analogy
Yes i will fly again,someone will realize how truly special i am
As for you,you fortell your hurt,maybe so
Im still alone as you slowly smashed my face down in the dirt
Take that red balloon or two,i dont need that to find someone new
A word of wisdom to you”know true love get a clue”
Maybe the balloon your holding is midnight blue

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lindalulu on Nov 2, 2008
Great write,very emotional.
gabbic1219 on Nov 2, 2008
latley,i have so much penned inside i cant help the anger flowing from my wrist,if i do not write about it i will just scream….so i rather put it down in thoughts as i scream in my head….believe it or not when im done i feel a little better ,like a little lighter….i can not say that i hate anyone ,just deeply hurt through a very uncomfortable sititution im in!there i feel better already!
eddiego65 on Nov 2, 2008
Great poem. Very expressive and heartfelt.
C Jordan on Nov 2, 2008
That was one heck of a scream.
R J Grant on Nov 2, 2008
Ya Dolly, go for it. I’d say tell us how you really feel but I think you already did that quite well.

I’m glad you feel better! There is nothing like spilling it out to get by it. The worst is over. you have spoken it all out.

Be well,
Grant
Tom Woodside on Nov 2, 2008
I write to get out hostility, pain, hurt.That’s why most of my stuff is dark, it has to go somewhere. Also, my teacher exlaimed that you want your reader to have an emotional reaction from it. That was after I made someone cry with one of my poems and I felt bad. Good Luck on your quest gabbic
Alicia Wind on Nov 2, 2008
A very good write, you expressed your heart into it which made this more emotional and captivating.

Thanks for adding me.

Take care.
PR Mace on Nov 6, 2008
Let it out girl, let it out. How emotional.
leannehume on Nov 10, 2008
Well huni, i know it’s no match but i think you are special.

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