I Honestly Love You

papaleng on Apr 6, 2009

Tags: health, pain, Poetry, relationship

Sometimes you have to let go of someone to show how much you love her.

I Honestly Love You

Can’t you see?
It’s hard for me
To let you go, Gracie.

Look into my eyes
The pain is unbearable
But I’ll not cry.

Now we have to cross
The bridge of “past and present”
Knowing what I’ll have to lose.

Guess I have to try
To forget and let you go
The memories I’ll carry till I die.

But what I lost is you,
Forever I’ll cherish our love
But there’s nothing I can do!

I called out your name,
In bed, heartbroken I lay,
To bleed in pain!

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Kate Smedley on Apr 6, 2009
That’s so heartbreaking, I guess we’ve all been there. What a lovely poem and I love the choice of song, one of my favourites by Olivia NJ.
mmblxbx on Apr 6, 2009
good article
Christine Ramsay on Apr 6, 2009
Such a sad poem, beautifully written.

Christine
Sandra A Flowers on Apr 6, 2009
beautiful,,
Liane Schmidt on Apr 6, 2009
This is absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking……

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Kim Buck on Apr 6, 2009
A broken heart is an awful thing. I hope you heal.
Abhichoco on Apr 6, 2009
touching…real touching..and very real..!!!
excellent job…
keep it up…
thanks…
Lauren Axelrod on Apr 6, 2009
Very heartbreaking but beautiful. Well done, packed with emotion.
macon on Apr 6, 2009
Such a sad poem. I felt like i was feeding my wounds with salt..
PR Mace on Apr 6, 2009
Heartbreaking in it’s saddness.
JoniA on Apr 6, 2009
Very nice,Papaleng
Debra Mann on Apr 6, 2009
Lovely piece, Papaleng.
Debra Mann on Apr 6, 2009
Lovely piece, Papaleng.
Lady Sunshine on Apr 6, 2009
Lovely in its melancholy. Breaks my heart. ;_;
Jeffrey B. Merrow on Apr 6, 2009
pain sometimes is realy the deliverer of healing good write
Ruby Hawk on Apr 6, 2009
Heartbreaking and sad, well written,
Juancav on Apr 6, 2009
I agree,lovely poem.
CutestPrincess on Apr 6, 2009
I can feel your lonely pain… and i can feel how sweet you are, i really like your song…
Eunice Tan on Apr 6, 2009
I agree the song by Olivia Newton-John will be perfect company for this situation.
Riley Themend on Apr 6, 2009
Beautiful… i love it a lot
Doki Ai on Apr 6, 2009
Yaaaaaannnnnnn!!!!!! ganda nya, heartbreaking pero beautiful…
iezzer on Apr 6, 2009
it’s very nice:)
Juhls on Apr 6, 2009
Eloquent and touching…. great video to accompany your words, Papaleng.
Inna Tysoe on Apr 6, 2009
That was touching.

Inna
The Quail on Apr 6, 2009
That was touching.
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Apr 7, 2009
So touching and sad.
Yovita Siswati on Apr 7, 2009
so sad… very heartbreaking!
Papa Sparks on Apr 7, 2009
Very lovely and evocative my friend. I remember when this song first came out back when I was a high school student.
Poetic Enigma on Apr 7, 2009
So sad and full of heartbreaking,
A heart wrenching piece
Glynis Smy on Apr 7, 2009
Such emotions! I enjoyed this piece.
nutuba on Apr 7, 2009
Papaleng, this is so open and heart wrenching, so transparent and beautifully written. What a tribute of love!
Joe Dorish on Apr 7, 2009
Great emotional piece.
Betty Carew on Apr 7, 2009
Very emotional and very well written Papaleng
rutherfranc on Apr 7, 2009
loved the background and the poem!
Mr Ghaz on Apr 8, 2009
That was cute poem..very emotional too. LOV it..thnx for sharing
MMV Abad on Apr 8, 2009
Great piece Papaleng. My kids are still young. I bet it would be really hard to let them go in the future. But hey! They must have a life of their own.
Ramalingam on Apr 9, 2009
Parting is painful but inevitable.what to do ?
Likha on Apr 11, 2009
I honestly like this.
Joni Keith on Apr 25, 2009
So touching and sad.
glamor707 on May 27, 2009
is this for me? LOL!!!

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