I Like to Feel How You Touch Me

standingproud on Mar 4, 2010

Tags: Den, lair, Lights, love, lovers, touching, treasure

Joining Me
pleasing Me.

You sexy man beast came to your lair

lover boy of mine, come to your Den, have you way with me…

I love it when you join me in our bed, it excites me in my mind knowing that you cant help your self, knowing that you will be mine.

When you are close to me your body aroma wafts over me taking total control of my mind, this enables me to lose my body into yours.

Just to feel your warmth on me, excited I do become, it is so powerful and very sexy as we join and become one.

You heart beat pounding on my full erect breasts , your magical fingers slightly squeezing my bum.

Our lips begin to tease , embracing interlocking, tongues exploring, teeth taking little nibbles hunting finding feeling our way around.

I close my eye lids letting you trace your way over my areas like your looking for lost treasures, oh how your sweet breath flows over me, our bodies begin interweaving so as to be combined.

I like to feel how you touch me, you are my world and I am locked into your very soul.

The lights are out now

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pearl2010 on Mar 4, 2010
A romantic poem for lovers who united their body as become one.Thanks for sharing.
Silent Wasp on Mar 4, 2010
Great poem, it gives me ideas for a poem lol Thanks for the read standingproud
Michael Eboh on Mar 4, 2010
OH SO CUT AND LOVELY. THINK OF ROMANCE?
Sourav on Mar 4, 2010
Very interesting write!
Atanacio on Mar 4, 2010
damn great write
johnnydod on Mar 4, 2010
Phew, that was good Donna you have one hell of a talent.
Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 4, 2010
I hope you shared this with the person it was written for. I am sure they will appreciate it.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 4, 2010
A tantalising piece. Well done.

Christine
diamondpoet on Mar 4, 2010
That was nice, but not your usual. thanks for sharing.
RS Wing on Mar 4, 2010
Lusty romance with cool imagery. I like the format and the prose too!
T. S. Lewis on Mar 4, 2010
Was glued to every word
Pete Marshall on Mar 4, 2010
enjoyed that thanks for the share
8Shei8 on Mar 4, 2010
You should right more of this
ashan1614 on Mar 4, 2010
I agree with diamondpoet – after ready the last poem about cats, this is quite a different animal altogether. Good write though.
Frances Lawrence on Mar 4, 2010
Very good.
ken bultman on Mar 4, 2010
If I should ever touch you It would be my pleasure, not yours.
ken bultman on Mar 4, 2010
Goddammit, I can’t read with the lights out.
ken bultman on Mar 4, 2010
Goddammit, I can’t read with the light off. I’ll touch you in a little while. I’m just getting to the good part.
ken bultman on Mar 4, 2010
If it be Triond’s pleasure I shall commment from now till Christmas. Jingle Bells. Touching Donna would be like glancing off the left side of heaven. I have yet to make that trip down under. I am proud to have made a new friend and I hope she is well touched.
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Mar 4, 2010
Oh Standingproud, the lights, computers and anything electric are all out after reading this amazing piece by you. A meaningful intimate vision coming clear all painted by you and your gift of writing being shared with all of us is the ultimate Honor…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
AlmaG on Mar 4, 2010
A very sensual piece
Jenilia12 on Mar 5, 2010
very well expressed.
Tina Cassello on Mar 5, 2010
You described this really well. I never liked to read romance novels but I would say this could be part of one.
Shirley Shuler on Mar 5, 2010
Great write, Donna. I was hanging on every word.
Lord Banks on Mar 5, 2010
Excellent poem, I’m not going to say keep it up! on this type of work, it maybe taken the wrong way! LB
Darla Cooke on Mar 5, 2010
Very sensual!!!
Evelyn M Carter on Mar 5, 2010
Very nice visual words. I could relate as I read. Good for you! Thanks for the share.
deep blue on Mar 6, 2010
Donna, Donna … I must have heard that song years back. You’re certainly from the land down under and you awaken monsters lurking there,lol. A passionate poem but certainly not for the weak hearted.
devsir on Mar 6, 2010
sensual
giftarist on Mar 6, 2010
Love it. And I like the imagery. Great, great write.
phyllis on Mar 6, 2010
Great– Love it– sexy sexy—
Poozie on Mar 6, 2010
Donna What A Wonderful Romantic an Very soft to read, when you know you’ve become one in side some ones heart. This is an excellent Write Donna, Thanks For Sharing This With Me.
Moira62 on Mar 7, 2010
So much love…passion…..this indeed is love:) wowwww
Starpisces on Mar 7, 2010
wow….
I can never write like this mam….
Starpisces on Mar 7, 2010
wow… well written.
I can never write like this memm!
mr1977 on Mar 7, 2010
very romantic
sambhafusia on Mar 7, 2010
well written
sambhafusia on Mar 7, 2010
well written and very romantic
Ruby Hawk on Mar 7, 2010
Well done, you leave nothing to the imagination.
yes me on Mar 7, 2010
Ah, you have a way of saying hmm…. the things some are miss.
great write cheers.
albert1jemi on Mar 8, 2010
lovely work
wonder on Mar 9, 2010
A great ambiance created by you, lovely!
Cheryl1109 on Mar 9, 2010
Donna, you did a geat jub. Proud of you, as always.
cheryl1109 on Mar 9, 2010
Donna, you did a great job. Proud of you , as always.
SharifaMcFarlane on Mar 10, 2010
Romantic write
LOVELYHONEY on Mar 10, 2010
wow wow and again wowowowowowowwwww
Vikram Chhabra on Mar 11, 2010
Wow. That was an erotic write!
Stan Wilson on Mar 11, 2010
It must be something to do with that southern west coast sea breezes you get down there Donna.All that snow capped mountain fresh clean air and water you have down there.Maybe its all that white bait,sea food and bluff oyster’s.Always knew you southern girl’s had it over your northern counterparts…….
Angelfire1 on Mar 12, 2010
Wow… very sweet Donna… it reminds me of something, just can’t put my finger on it right now I know it will come to me soon…haha I’ll let you know later…
XXElleXX on Mar 12, 2010
Damn! Hehehehe…makes me wanna go shag my current squeeze…Oooo…very erm erm ~ a pleasure to read Standingproud

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