For a Mother who has just lost her child…

A poetic conversation between a mother and her dead son.

Oh bring back those days I had with you, 

My heart yearns to see that gentle smile, 

The hours we had were just so few, 

But I’ll treasure them all the while. 

You were my innocent baby sweet, 

A gift from love, my great short term treat. 

For the love and joy you brought our way, 

Form memories we live with today. 

You were a gentle soul my love, 

Angelic face sent from above. 

You were my apple, my star and joy, 

And For you I forever shall cry. 

Then a little voice to me does say, 

I’m here with you forever to stay. 

I had a purpose to live that way, 

They decreed I had to go away.

Each night I come to be in your arms, 

To give your grieving heart soulful rest. 

To gently heal the wounds with balms, 

For cuts I left upon your breast. 

You are my mother and will always be, 

You were everything in the world to me.

You kissed me, cared and nurtured me, 

Made me what was meant to be. 

Maybe if I had my way, 

I would have chosen to stay. 

But my Creator had plans for me, 

In the realms of deep Infinity. 

Don’t cry for me for I am at rest, 

I’ve found my inner peace. 

I will live on in your tender breast, 

For memories never cease.  

Don’t mourn for me for I’m alive, 

In the world called Eternity, 

Waiting for you is what I’ll strive, 

When you attain Infinity. 

My mortal remains are all but gone, 

But I pray please don’t look so forlorn. 

I am around never more to part,

For I live on in your grieving heart.

My dearest baby, there you’ll stay,

Till I unite with you someday.

Visit me every night I pray,

And take my tears and pain away.

My gentle star, my guiding light,

You put on a very brave fight.

Although you had to go away,

I know your love for me will stay.

Baby how I miss you so,

The world around will never know.

You were the apple of my eye,

The only reason that I cry.

My dear mum, I am your son,

Forever that I will be.

My mortal remains, yes, it did part,

But I live on in your loving heart.  

Just close your eyes and remember me, 

I’m everywhere you want me to be. 

I’m part of your loving family, 

But alive only in memory. 

Mother and Baby

By Anisha Achankunju

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 19, 2009

    itz quite touching and the feelings of a mother is truely expressed..butiful poem..

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 19, 2009

    It is heart touching….wow..

  • Goodselfme on Nov 19, 2009

    I had a hard time reading this even though I never lost a child. You expressed this well.

  • goindia on Nov 19, 2009

    Really touched my heart.

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  • ken bultman on Nov 19, 2009

    Lovely, poinant two way conversation set to rhyme.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 19, 2009

    Very touching indeed.

  • Shabnam on Nov 19, 2009

    Beautiful one… loved the conversationalistic style

  • wonder on Nov 19, 2009

    Very creative and touching.

  • craigz on Nov 19, 2009

    Thoughtful post.

  • Darla Smith on Nov 19, 2009

    A beautiful and touching poem!

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 19, 2009

    An experience we share. Poetic writing helps. It took me many years to grieve properly, see my poem THE SMILES.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 19, 2009

    I should add as well my poem CHILD’S DEATH. I have visited that place twice in my life, way to many times.

  • MMV Abad on Nov 19, 2009

    Very heart- warming poem. Thank you.

  • shanthu on Nov 19, 2009

    wonderful….

  • K.Reshma on Nov 19, 2009

    Very nice

  • jimbob1 on Nov 19, 2009

    AA – This is truly one of those memorable, emotional, heart-wrenching poems that through their meaningful and touching message set themselves apart from the mainstream. Wonderful job. Thanks.
    Edit…
    “I am around never and to part…” “I am around never more to part…”???

  • Themax on Nov 19, 2009

    ahhh! A mother love is always special,Wonderful!! Thanks for sharing :)

  • Annashank on Nov 19, 2009

    Thank you all for your heartfelt messages!!!

    This poem was written for a relative of mine who lost her nearly two year old son to pneumonia recently…

    I have had loss but not at the scale this lady has gone through…

    Teena, this poem is for Tom, (Late) Matthew and you!!! You can read it as many times as you want, its yours…

    Will publish the story of this little boys\’ life once I get permission from his mother and family to do so, its heart wrenching to even think of it ….

  • lillyrose on Nov 19, 2009

    very emotional piece, very sad. You presented the poem beautifully!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 19, 2009

    Very beautiful and so memorable.

  • LovelyWolf on Nov 20, 2009

    A real tear-jerker! Thank you for sharing such a great poem!

  • Shekinah Shazaam on Nov 23, 2009

    So touching and wonderful and thoughtful! =D

  • Starpisces on Nov 25, 2009

    a nice but sad poem…

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