I Lost My Mind

buldani on Jan 24, 2011

This article is about Poetry.

There are many kinds of flower but only you the pretty flower that i want.

when you are smiling, it is time for me to get spirit.

you are like a cloud, you look so clear when i look at you from long distance

but, when i came to you, you are disappear.

Now every think about you are lost. there is no pretty flower anymore, there is no spirit source anymore.

I am happy to see you happy with your life. although we do not always be a part.

Thank for all.

I lost my mind,,,to get my dreams. i lost almost all my spirit sources but the show must go on.

Once again I lost my mind.

Hmmmm am i like skilled poet now?

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Comments (8)

The Quail 1957 on Jan 24, 2011
Great poem and straight from your heart!
albert1jemi on Jan 24, 2011
Thanks for sharing
LJ Spain on Jan 24, 2011
Very pretty.
Yovita Siswati on Jan 25, 2011
beautiful poem.
papaleng on Jan 25, 2011
forget about the meters or rhymes, this one is beautiful
buldani on Jan 25, 2011
Thank For your Comment, by the way i am not poet so there are many things that should be improve in my poetry.

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Christine Ramsay on Jan 31, 2011
I think it is a very romantic and well written poem.

Christine
real lady on Feb 1, 2011
wow…so sweet…liked it

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