A poem I wrote from a writing challenge.


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I love spending time with you,

just passing the hours together.

I love us talking over coffee,

and walking in the local park.

Shopping trips are an adventure,

and I love us eating at the cafe.

I love us watching movies on TV,

and emailing over the internet.

I love us sharing special memories,

discussing our plans and goals.

I know that you and I together,

will make our dreams a reality.

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  • raman13 on Feb 26, 2010

    Brilliant Write

    Best Regards.

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 26, 2010

    Good Share

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 26, 2010

    It is nice to have someone to share these things with. A lovely poem.


  • moneynwealth on Feb 26, 2010

    I really enjoyed reading your post, inspiring.

    :) good health and success,

  • ashan1614 on Feb 26, 2010

    I think relationships are better when the couple can enjoy the ordinary, everyday things together.

  • Starpisces on Feb 26, 2010

    nice one…
    by the way, I love the time spent with you all in Triond too, ha ha..

  • Brenda Nelson on Feb 26, 2010

    very good poem, we should be happy together working on each others dreams and sharing them

  • diamondpoet on Feb 26, 2010

    Very sweet and romatic..

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 26, 2010

    That sounds idyllic, a well met writing challenge Darla.

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Feb 26, 2010

    nice keep it up

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 26, 2010

    Very Nice one…

  • chellsy on Feb 26, 2010

    nice one

  • Pete Marshall on Feb 26, 2010

    nice poem – liked alot

  • XXElleXX on Feb 26, 2010

    I’d much rather take a walk in the park and eat at a fancy cafe/ restaurant anyday…than spend the morning in bed with champagne, crossiants and strawberries Darla :-)

  • ken bultman on Feb 26, 2010

    Ya done good.

  • giftarist on Feb 26, 2010

    Well done.

  • Haseeb Aslam on Feb 26, 2010

    just so beautiful…and touching.

  • Haseeb Aslam on Feb 26, 2010

    wonderful words…

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 26, 2010

    way da go,

  • mandy2345 on Feb 27, 2010

    very well done poem A++!!

  • Temjen Imchen on Feb 27, 2010

    Very sweet poem, Darla.

  • albert1jemi on Feb 27, 2010

    nice poem

  • albert1jemi on Feb 27, 2010

    nice poem..

  • petercurtis97 on Feb 28, 2010

    Nice share

  • STEVE666 on Mar 1, 2010

    Cosy! Do you ever win these writing challenges?

  • Darla Beck on Mar 1, 2010

    I just do these challenges for fun, not to try and win.

  • mishee on Mar 27, 2010

    thanks for sharing!

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