I Love When..

MrZebra84 on Apr 11, 2009

Tags: facade, love, smile, wild

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A poem about the most wonderful guy in the world

I love when you smile

The smile of a child

I love when you hold me

When I’m done running wild

I love when you see past

The facade I project

I love when you impart

Boundless love and respect

I love when you laugh at

Stupid things that I do

I love when you show me

Pieces of the real you

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Comments (17)

Kate Smedley on Apr 11, 2009
That’s so sweet and romantic, hope he appreciates you hon .. what a lovely poem.
Darla Cooke on Apr 11, 2009
A very beautiful poem.
Christine Ramsay on Apr 11, 2009
A beautifully written poem. He sounds wonderful.

Christine
papaleng on Apr 11, 2009
lovely and romantic, Thanks for sharing it.
clay hurtubise on Apr 11, 2009
Wow, your emotions are displayed in this poem so well. Beautiful work.
Thanks,
Clay
Betty Carew on Apr 12, 2009
So sweet and romantic Mr Z
Stickinthemud on Apr 12, 2009
This is well thought out and well executed. Nice portrayal of the satisfaction of feeling loved. Thanks.
Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Apr 13, 2009
this sounds like a love song, very emotional, romantic…
OhSugar on Apr 13, 2009
Love the flow of this romantic poem. Thanks for sharing it.
M J katz on Apr 13, 2009
I liked this a lot! Very real and down-to-earth! This is definitely something that anyone could relate to!
marisolflamenco on Apr 20, 2009
Beautiful, emotional poem
ML Sheldon on May 7, 2009
Aw, very sweet.
Ruby Hawk on May 11, 2009
And I love your poem.
tap on May 20, 2009
Very nice one!
julianhw on May 28, 2009
Well crafted – I liked this a lot
swatilohani on Jun 5, 2009
cool
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 2, 2009
i love u for the love u show

may with in u love grow

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