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I Love You

saritajain86 on Nov 6, 2009
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When you are deeply in love with the someone and you want to express your love in simple, yet effective way.

“When I saw you the first time,

I could feel you withing my heart,

Thinking about you,

My day always start,

Soon,

You became my sweetheart,

I promise to never make you hurt,

I love you with all my heart.”

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  • lillyrose on Nov 6, 2009

    I think you expressed beautifully!

  • Anurag02 on Nov 6, 2009

    I think somebody is in your heart.

    Nice poetry, I can feel your love. have good time!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 6, 2009

    neatly said,

  • Doaa Abdelfattah on Nov 6, 2009

    Welcome to Triond

  • Tracey Parece on Nov 6, 2009

    This was a very beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it and I am happy to have you as a friend. ~Tracey

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 7, 2009

    The English could be a bit better but good job.

  • girlnextdoor on Nov 10, 2009

    Sweetness and freshness of a budding romance is in the ai, lovely lines, lucidly expressive of intense love…

  • V rank on Nov 17, 2009

    Write more friend…! Being in-love is a good start in writing great article in Triond or anywhere else… It brings positivity… !

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