When you love someone you can do anything for her to make her feel safe and good, whatever doesn’t matter might take your life and keeps you apart to see her Just happy!

When You Look up

too Hi and Hi

Into star filled

beautiful night sky

Knowing that it’s over

at the end

The day I’ll still kiss you

through my pain

In a beautiful day when

sun is above Shine

seeing you worried

and whispering my rhyme

I’ll still burn your darkness

through my pain

To see you just happy

my love once again

At the rainy day

when the sky turn darker

we are wet and our

pain become sharper

I’ll still touch you and

Hug you with softer

To show you our

love and bring you lost laughter

If I said, no one care about me

You always say, yes I am

I am here to care & set you free

I just cried when you said

I’ve fallen in love with you

And I never let you go

I love you too my love

just have to let you know

I made you promise

never to leave you a day

when I still know there

is not me nor my today

you’ll still alive in my heart

In every breath I take of your name

Baby you took my heart oneday

That’s why I am still alive 

stars will gone after

sun will lost forever

earth will stop moving

wind will stop blowing

even after that day our

love will still glowing

for Those fights that we have fought

for Those rhymes that we have written

Forgiving our times and troubles

moments togather we liven

I got my new born and

That’d never be forgotten

so I promise to you

My love  My baby in my remain

I love you : In spite of my Pain

   

You gave me the reasons to hold on and fight,I lost because I know If I win I’ll lost you

                                                                                               Max.J Morgan-

  


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  • devsir on Jan 19, 2010

    Everytime I read this, I fall in love with this. Well Done!

  • deep blue on Jan 20, 2010

    Well done, Max. Well expressed.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 22, 2010

    Beautiful poem Max.

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 25, 2010

    Nice words

  • Marie Antoinette on Jan 26, 2010

    This poem is full of love, angst, soul, and care. A beautiful piece.

  • Aiyanna on Jan 29, 2010

    To fall in love is easy,
    To stay in love is hard…
    But when you love truly,
    Hurts’ always on the card…

    Max I feel the love, joy, pain anguish and all the other emotions incorporated in this poem…. May your lady love know that she is the luckiest woman to have a man who worships the ground she walks on…
    You are blessed and unique, a person who dared to love totally… That is why you are special… :)

  • Sweety on Feb 3, 2010

    Nicely pened.

  • seema1962 on Feb 9, 2010

    really beautiful story.

  • Diverseblogger on Feb 13, 2010

    Wow! I am in love with this poem. Such a diverse and intriguing piece. Keep up the great work

  • mikky webs on Mar 8, 2010

    Hoolala. I have this to share with my better half. Thanks.

  • LoveDoctor on Mar 17, 2010

    Max,

    Where have you been hiding canadian cutite? lol.

    you have a new born? or at least that’s what your poem says.

    :) hope everything is well.

  • Brent on May 10, 2010

    A very beautiful poem just a bit sad though. People go through a lot in life, and there are decisions that we make that we cannot change anymore.

    You love her but you chose to give up on her (from your words ” If I win I’ll still loose you”). That’s a very hard decision you made. Often times people still hold on eventhough the other has left, but once that person who keeps holding on decides to let go, there will be no turning back. If she was a treasure, from the way you described love, then you just lost a treasure.

    Treasures are hard to find. I lost one myself when I made a similar decision like you did. I have lost her forever and I can never bring her back. If I could only turn back time.

    I hope with this decision, you know made the right choice and would never regret it.

    Treasures comes only once in a life time. Once it’s gone, it’s gone.

  • LoveDoctor on May 10, 2010

    This is so beautiful and heartfelt. If you love her so much, why are you letting her go? Take a chance, don’t be scared. Go and find her whoever she is. This poem made me tear.

  • Stacy Calvert on May 12, 2010

    Lovely poem.

    I agree with Love Doctor. If you love her don’t let her go. Go and find her and don’t be scared.

    Sometimes what you think is best for someone is actually not. If you think that you are doing this to protect her you might be wrong.

    Don’t let a very precious person slip away from you like that. You might not meet another one as precious as this girl you love. Of course you’ll meet a lot of girls but rare ones like this you are referring to who made you write a poem as beautiful as this is for sure comes only once in a life time.

    So I would reiterate what Love Doctor said “take a chance and don’t be scared.”

  • AlmaG on May 13, 2010

    Thank you Max for these wonderful poem, and for everything.

  • AlmaG on May 13, 2010

    Sorry typo hehe ^_^ I mean “for THIS wonderful poem” …

  • Joy on Jun 27, 2010

    Where are you stupid kitty???

  • AlmaG on Aug 1, 2010

    Come back…

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