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I Need Bail Haiku

LewSethics on Dec 5, 2010
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Where was I last night?

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I Need Bail Haiku

where the hell was I      

I dropped my keys and reached down

and woke up in jail              

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http://www.triond.com/users/LewSethics

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http://authspot.com/short-stories/a-short-prehistory-when-flies-ruled-the-earth/

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http://authspot.com/poetry/a-yule-tool/

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  • yes me on Dec 5, 2010

    Spent some time on this, I’m sure I saw you… a bit one over the other, but still on your feet… I’ll put the hat round see if we can’t get you out before the holiday’s cheers Lew

  • dino renaldo on Dec 5, 2010

    nice share.thanks

  • Goodselfme on Dec 6, 2010

    I quickly had to orient myself to the fact that this was a haiku. Well done!

  • Freethinking on Dec 6, 2010

    So here we are in the Tijuana Jail….ain’t got no friends to go our bail. Hiccup :)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 11, 2010

    Liked it-good imagery.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 11, 2010

    One of the better Haiku I’ve read, because it’s left an afterimage in my mind for me to consider.

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