I offer you.

I offer you my hand,
To take and hold in yours.
To give you strenght and comfort,
Unlike you’ve had before.

I offer you my arms,
To hold you close when unsure.
To give you tenderness and warmth,
So that again your heart will endure.

I offer you my smile,
To help yours shine each day.
To give you happiness and joy,
So you can share with others all along your way.

I offer you my eyes,
So you can look deep into my soul.
To give you sight well within me,
So my true feelings you would know.

I offer you my heart,
So once again your may feel.
To show you I do care,
So once again your heart will heal.

All these I offer you,
To have yours,an honor it would be.
To have your hand,arms,smile,eyes and heart,
God himself would have truely blessed me.

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Comments (9)
  • zulfiqarali5 on Sep 18, 2010

    nice share thanks ! also check my articles too waiting for ur response

  • RedbeD on Sep 18, 2010

    Awwww…..

  • wonder on Sep 18, 2010

    So creatively composed.

  • CA Johnson on Sep 18, 2010

    Your poem was really beautiful and romantic.

  • Tina Cassello on Sep 19, 2010

    This is another very nice love poem. You did spell truly wrong. You drop the e when you add ly. The last couple of lines do not fit as well because of their length, but I like what you say.

  • Starpisces on Sep 19, 2010

    nice poem, thanks for all your offer, haha.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Sep 19, 2010

    Beautifully written.

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 19, 2010

    Great poem.

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 19, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

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