Rapturous love between two individuals not to be forgotten.

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Tell me, tell me true.

Can you feel my love for you?

I watch when you know not.

I watch and become steaming hot.

I savor this feeling

and envision your hands

moving over the hills and valleys,

sending my head to reeling.

The closeness of your breath against my neck

sets my blood to boiling.

Your body is so close

that my legs start coiling.

You handle me oh so well.

I bet you could tell.

I quiver, though not from being cold.

I am burning on fire that comes from within.

The rhythmic sensations happen again and again.

When you caress me the only way true to you,

I open up my soul to you.

I cleave unto the desire that emanates from your heart,

giving my body such a rapturous start.

Take me at thine own will my love.

Engorge my flesh with the presence

 of the wild beast inside of you,

bringing me closer and closer to an oceanic thrill,

that flows from your portal to the hollows of my gates,

leaving us intertwined

 until the desire leaves our body and abates.

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  • Vincent Eggleston Jr on Dec 14, 2009

    Very very good..

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 14, 2009

    All I can say is teach me and again Ooo Wee. You are good!

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 14, 2009

    in two words beautiful, beautiful…ohhhh to be the recipient of such wonders….excellent poem, will come back for more….take care

  • diamondpoet on Dec 14, 2009

    That was very erotic, I had to stop reading that\’s how good it was.

  • M Dalton on Dec 14, 2009

    Wow

  • jimbob1 on Dec 15, 2009

    DB…You have caused my pulse to quicken and beads of sweat to form as I read this incredible adventure in eroticism. A beautiful job in putting pen to paper and an incredible read as the meaning of the words was plucked from the paper in response. Thank you.

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