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I Promise

LOVELYHONEY on Apr 20, 2009
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A word of praise is all I need to give my life,to just anyone.

You ma’am praise me,

More than I deserve.

My heart is a forest of reserve,

For those who need blood resuscitation.

As it bursts,

Blood will flow,

As a medico you’d know.

Those who wish to partake,

Of my honey like blood,

Can make a show.

Take all my blood,

From me,

Ere I go.

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  • topelectrician on Apr 20, 2009

    another wonderful piece honey….you are so sweet!

  • Nosa on Apr 20, 2009

    I like it,but it’s a bit like a switch;more of blood than promise I think.

  • Darla Cooke on Apr 20, 2009

    Interesting.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 20, 2009

    Someone asked me to use more metaphors,
    And I asked what a metaphor?
    Was for,
    And so this poem some one needs to understand,
    Why the poet wrote it.
    So it’s for each one.
    To imagine what,
    The flow of blood indicates so.

  • nesita on Apr 20, 2009

    Well written.

  • George W Whitehead on Apr 20, 2009

    I like it, LH.

  • CutestPrincess on May 10, 2009

    i love this one…

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