A poem inspired by a song.

I’m feeling so lost

Losing control

Gotta find a way

Outta this hole

This helpless feeling

Spreading so fast

I try to be first but

always come last

I realize

There’s more to me than I thought

I realize

There’s more to life than what can be bought

I realize

You and I aren’t so different inside

I realize

Gotta find the part inside me that died

Fixing this empty feeling

Never knew before

If you search the embers

You can learn so much more

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Comments (2)
  • Nisa West on Sep 18, 2009

    Moving… I like this one. Keep writing!

  • tfried on Sep 19, 2009

    I like your style.. very good.

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