I really love you.

I really love to love you do not lose heart
You may find it hard to believe
So leave me to prove that
I close my eyes the sky has become transparent
Gentle evaporation of the sun all the teardrop
Love is not asked to continue to echo
I really love to love you out of proportion to the specificity
Fly the childish affection you
I use my freedom of solitude for you to breathe
I really love you to stay in the world call you the edge
With my gorgeous is not only adhere to the voices of
Finally talk to you I really love you

You may give up I can not forget
Please let him spoil you stubborn secretly you want to cry
I really love to love you out of proportion to the specificity
Fly the childish affection you
I use my freedom of solitude for you to breathe
I really love you to stay in the world call you the edge
With my gorgeous is not only adhere to the voices of
Finally talk to you I really love you

I really love you to stay in the world call you the edge
With my gorgeous is not only adhere to the voices of
Finally talk to you I really love you
I really love you

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Comments (15)
  • The Soul Explorer on Jul 2, 2009

    that’s so sweet… nice poem!

  • Miss ReadALot on Jul 3, 2009

    wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it.

  • Dee Gold on Jul 3, 2009

    sweet

  • Jamie Myles on Jul 3, 2009

    Very nice. Interesting style

  • dwayne on Jul 3, 2009

    interesting style, I really felt the emotion within it

  • lh on Jul 3, 2009

    its lovely to love

  • Alex Wolfe on Jul 3, 2009

    I loved the poem.

  • Twoface on Jul 3, 2009

    The poem has good meaning I just wish I understood it too the full extent! >.

  • AveryColeman on Jul 5, 2009

    It’s strange that when people don’t understand the meaning (or lack thereof) of a poem, they automatically assume it’s because the poem itself is incredibly deep and profound.

    Even stranger: Writers tend to get away with this and, thus praised, continue to write incomprehensibly.

    Well, I have to say that I’m not impressed and that clear wording is not the death of artistic expression.

  • Melinda McQueen on Jul 5, 2009

    Love is something to be desired.
    Nice poem.

  • cebuanaeyez on Jul 5, 2009

    lovely poem :)

  • lindalulu on Jul 6, 2009

    Nice poem but keep practicing your english.

  • jolinx on Jul 6, 2009

    broken english ..
    but i know what you want !

  • kreshapaw on Jul 7, 2009

    You really touched my heart and my mind.

  • J.J. on Jul 7, 2009

    Nice poem

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