Just thinking about the loss of a very courageous loved one…
RIP SGT ROB D SANCHEZ,( Killed In Action)Oct 1, 2009……………
You remain cousin… you remain……. always remembered, never forgotten,
you remain………………

tick tock upon the hour clock,

time stands still, then fades away,

the floor beneath now ashes at my feet,

yet I don’t fall through, I remain…..

tick tock upon the hour clock

the air around seems thick and dull,

my breath hitches as I dissapear into the wall,

yet I don’t fuse, I remain…..

tick tock upon the hour clock

my shadow drags me along a jagged rock,

my feet tangle in a knot, anguish in my heart,

Yet I don’t give up, I remain……

tick tock upon the hour clock

tears are ripped from the windows of my soul,

courage bubbles through my veins as I refuse to go,

Yet I long to follow into the beyond, I remain…..

tick tock upon the hour clock

time stands still, then moves again,

the floor beneath not quite solid yet,

but I remain…. through memory I remain

It can be no other way because love allows me to remain……..

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  • Guy Hogan on Oct 7, 2010

    The loss of a loved one is always a terrible thing no matter what the reason is. I served in Vietnam. I was one of the lucky ones.

  • R.Laws on Oct 14, 2010

    Nice share

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