A memory of someone that has passed on.

I remember the days where we shared all our time,
The moments we stole when your love was mine,
I remember you being love’s pure reflection,
I remember us sharing an awesome connection,
I remember your voice,
Soothing my fears,
I remember your hands,
Drying my tears,
I remember your smile, it radiated from within,
To really tell this love story where would I begin?
We parted ways without saying goodbye,
Never to meet again you and I,
Your earthly journey ended in tragedy,
If only we then knew what would eventually be,
I am certain we would have loved each other more intently.

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Comments (6)
  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 17, 2008

    ..so sweet..physically detached
    …but emotionally attached..

  • Ed Moore on Apr 17, 2008

    Tracy…This is nice…you’ve said it all in a very short poem. Good job!

  • Bertie on Apr 17, 2008

    All I can say is “BEAUTIFUL”

  • Moses Ingram on Apr 23, 2008

    This is a beautiful poem, and it says so much. I lost a loved one suddenly with no chance to say good-bye, and thought many times of all that I wanted to say and didn’t.

  • Divakar on Apr 23, 2008

    Really..beautiful..

  • salvatore on May 13, 2008

    a beautiful poem, and sad

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