Pondering, self image,thought.

I see

Who do I see, when I see me.

Do I see the me that I ought to see?

Or do I see a me

that’s a little bit lazy.

Or do I see a me

that’s a whole lot of crazy.

Do I see a me whose direction in life

Has become confused

And mighty hazy.

What do others see when they see me?

Do they see the me

That I intend for them to see?

Do they see the me

That works diligently

Do they see the me?

That approaches respectfully.

Do they see the me

That dotes on punctuality

Do they see my demeanor of honesty?

What do I see when I see me?

Do I see what others see

When they see me

Well, All that I can plainly see,

When taking a real good look at me,

Is someone that I just love to be.

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  • TroostAvenue on Nov 24, 2009

    Best choice you could have made.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 24, 2009

    That was a great flow, it would seem that you have me down pact, I me you, you know what I mean.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 24, 2009

    Nice flow of words “I See”

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 24, 2009

    I liked this poem very much.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 24, 2009

    First know thy self and this will set you free. Yes indeed.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 24, 2009

    To thine own self be true.

  • Justfer on Nov 24, 2009

    nice you, that’s what i see in you.

  • athena goodlight on Dec 2, 2009

    Good poem! It’s very introspective.

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