A girl trys to help the man she loves but in the end she could do nothing for him of her self.

As the knife digs in to my chest I barley care at all.

His hand releases quickly as he turns to walk away.

I fall to my knees in pain.

The blood warm on my skin stains it path.

I knew you were going to do this and yet I gave u the chance. 

It feels better to try than to stand in the rain of ones own self pity.

 Farwell young one and May you fined your love.

I’m sorry I wasn’t good enough for you…

 

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  • Ukrainian on Oct 22, 2010

    Unrequited love?

  • Fro on Oct 23, 2010

    This almost seems to be an adaption of “women staying with bad/abusive men”. They wanna help, but they get in the way of the erratic man’s behavior/psychotic thinking. I dig it.

  • ady975 on Feb 28, 2011

    nice one……

  • suzain on Apr 21, 2011

    Nice article

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