This is another poem that I wrote a while back when everything wasn’t going too good. I hope you enjoy it.

You broke my heart,

Shattered my soul,

I never knew,

I never saw it coming.

The pain took over,

The hurt inside grew,

Tear were shed,

But I still loved you.

My wrists were bleeding,

My heart was aching,

The thoughts were racing,

The pain was winning,

My life was breaking,

But I still loved you.

You thought I would leave,

I still stood and waited,

You had someone to come back to,

I still love you.

We’re rebuilding our life,

Taking it day by day,

I see the sun shining,

Love is on it’s way.

Always and forever,

I still love you.

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  • fantasygirl18 on Jul 22, 2011

    this poem was fantasic.i don’t know why but i can’t believe how much your poems connect to me. hope you will read some of my poems to see if you connect as well, thanks your poems are beyond any words. ;p

  • Socorro Lawas on Aug 23, 2011

    Nothing wrong with your feeling. You are normal, very human to feel the pain.

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