A funny poem about a guy who finally realized that his girlfriend was just lying to him.

I Thought I Was Smart

A poem I’ve written sometime ago about a friend who finally realized that his girlfriend was just lying to him.

There was a guy who asked her beautiful girl,
Sweetheart, “Am I Handsome?”
“Yes you are”, as her face quickly twirls,
“You are dazzling young man!”

But people say I’m a dumb nut,
The perfect opposite of Einstein,
“No you’re not” Mind then not!
Perhaps they have too much of wine.

Peers said, “Your ideas are useless”
“And Dad said I’m weird”,
She said, “To me.. You are Mr. Effectiveness
And every girl’s dream of Mr. Brave”

Her girl’s words lifted up his ego
And keep on believing
He is a smart guy and a handsome beau
Until one day he found out that her sweetie was lying.

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  • MJRapp on Dec 18, 2011

    Eh, my wife is probably lying when she says I’m smart too. That’s okay; I’ll take it.

  • fragile18 on Dec 18, 2011

    haha nice poem po papaleng :D

  • Melody SJAL on Dec 18, 2011

    Very nice, papaleng.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 18, 2011

    At least, he realised he was cheated.

  • Starpisces on Dec 18, 2011

    hehe, nice poem.
    I think his girlfriend is just telling a white lie, not cheating, or maybe in her eyes, he is perfect….

  • Brenda Nelson on Dec 18, 2011

    Dang it, it sucks to be lied to.

  • LCM Linda on Dec 18, 2011

    Interesting poem. Lying boosted his ego but I guess it hurt more when he finally discovered the truth.

  • pruelpo on Dec 19, 2011

    You are always smart dude for everything. Love it.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 19, 2011

    Lol
    Guess he did his own analysis.

  • erwinkennythomas on Dec 19, 2011

    some white lies I call it

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 20, 2011

    Lol. Nice work, papaleng.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 20, 2011

    She was just trying to boost his confidence. Nice work.

  • FX777222999 on Dec 20, 2011

    Just be smart for this relationship.

  • http://codedincantation.com/blog/ on Dec 21, 2011

    It’s just a make belief.
    Better tell the truth.
    (http://codedincantation.com/blog/)

  • ittech on Dec 21, 2011

    A smart guy and deed
    Beauuntil kris milkweed
    He found out that reed
    Was lying qualified lead

  • reiny on Dec 21, 2011

    haha sometimes the girl need to lie for positive reasons

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 22, 2011

    Lol you either want to hear the hard truth or a nice lie, but if you really want the truth you better be prepard to accept it

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 23, 2011

    white lies I guess on the part of the girl so as too boost his guy’s ego and morale =)

  • sheilanewton on Dec 24, 2011

    Abosultely super stuff, my friend. Merry Christmas too – oh, and Happy New Year.

  • FX777222999 on Jan 6, 2012

    Good poem..a smart one.

  • Eunike on Jan 17, 2012

    So interesting

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 20, 2012

    She’s probably after his money. Poor thing.

  • lucia anna on Jan 20, 2012

    Very interesting work

  • dodolbete on Feb 26, 2012

    LOL… I’m waiting for the time when my ex find it out ^,^

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