Heart and brain sometimes don’t compromise each other. The first speaks and listen to reasons ,the latter doesn’t know and don’t listen to reason, it has its own reason which reason itself doesn’t know.

  I told myself  I’m over you ,

  I told my friends i am done ,

  I told my bestfriend you weren’t worth it ,

  I told my mentor enough is enough,

  I told my diary it  reaches to the limit,

  I told my angel i am giving ultimatum,

  I told my God , am tired and surrendered 

But my heart told me , it was all lie.

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Comments (10)
  • Vinaya says good bye on Dec 30, 2011

    Your poetry is like an inverted triangle, the apex pointing downward hits.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 30, 2011

    Your heart knows.

  • girishpuri on Dec 31, 2011

    i am tired and surrendered , nice work

  • aheed411 on Dec 31, 2011

    You are sensitive

  • ittech on Dec 31, 2011

    GR8 post

    TX 2 share

  • Avik Chattopadhyay on Jan 2, 2012

    How can u express so deep feelings so easily?

  • Yvhes P. on Jan 2, 2012

    very good post. I enjoyed reading it =)

  • ittech on Jan 2, 2012

    I told my image , am bored and given

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 3, 2012

    great work

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Apr 19, 2012

    Heartlfelt and moving poem…

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