Counting, talking, dancing, standing, and resting.

This is a poem now:

Can I count to 5?

How is the food here?

Is the music sounding good?

Do you feel like company?

Part 2:

How old is this person?

Where is the right place?

When should I go there?

Who is at the place?

Is there any problem here?

Part 3:

What time is it now?

What is the right side?

Who makes the good food?

How can I help them?

Can I stay here now?

Part 4:

What else can I say?

Am I done with this?

Where am I going when?

This is still making sense?

What is the proper hello?

Part 5:

Will I feed those ones?

Can I keep them safe?

Do I know what is up?

Does it really matter?

Are you home. 

The end?

(yes).

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  • amandeep13 on Mar 6, 2010

    Very Interesting

    Well Written

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