Poem on childhood pressures.

This one comes straight from a mixture of my thoughts and a Bollywood movie song. It’s about the parental pressure imposed on the kids to excel in studies at the cost of their interests. So, here it goes.

I came to this world,

Without pain and worries.

But now as I am growing old,

I am forgetting the taste of strawberries.

There was a time,

When my Dad played with me.

I tasted first time sweet lime,

No worries and sorrows with me.

But time went by,

To change the scene.

Expectations increased, why?

Everyone turned out to be selfish and mean.

Dad said,

Bring 90% marks and get a watch.

Or else,

You just wait and watch!

Where has that time disappeared?

When people used to be so gentle.

When Dad scratched me with his beard,

But now I am going mental!

I want to be someone else,

Forced to be someone else.

I am being someone else,

Just to be someone else.

Give me some sunshine,

Give me some rain.

Give me another chance,

I wanna grow up once again!

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Comments (5)
  • AbhishekDas on Oct 12, 2010

    nice1

  • The forgiver on Oct 12, 2010

    Thanks

  • lovestar on Oct 12, 2010

    nice song 3 idiot

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 12, 2010

    A nice little song.

  • The forgiver on Oct 13, 2010

    Thanks :) Well, this one is not totally copied from the song but only 8 lines are copied. They are:
    Dad said,

    Bring 90% marks and get a watch.

    Or else,

    You just wait and watch!

    And:
    Give me some sunshine,

    Give me some rain.

    Give me another chance,

    I wanna grow up once again!

    Rest I have written on my own.
    Thanks for reading. Have a nice day.

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