About love and distance.

I have loved you for a thousand lifetimes
And I shall love you for ten thousand more
As I gaze upon your loveliness
I know for certain that there is a God
For no one else could create such beauty
Each moment away from you seems an eternity
Without you by my side
My heart grows weary from the toils of life
Hearing your voice sustains and lifts me
I want only to be near you
I am sorry for those around me
For they know not what love truly is
They speak not of family and a wish to be home
But rather a love for the almighty dollar
A man can live without money
But a man without love is already dead

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  • Naomi Joyce Lewis on Feb 9, 2009

    I am happy you are so observant of the things that truly are valuable in life and cannot be replaced. Money is only a small part of what is required for a sucessfull life. grandma

  • Glynis Smy on Feb 9, 2009

    How lovely, beautiful emotions

  • PR Mace on Feb 9, 2009

    Very well spoken and meaningful works. Well, well done, my friend.

  • Dawn S. on Feb 9, 2009

    Very true I wish more men would realize it.

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 9, 2009

    Thank you Ma, Glynis, Pam and Dawn.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Feb 9, 2009

    Very well expressed, Nick. Another good one.

  • Nick Kenney on Feb 10, 2009

    Thank you Darlene…

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