I Want to Clean My Black Past

girishpuri on Nov 4, 2011

Tags: confess, criminal, Father

Confession of a criminal to the Father in a church.

My dear Father today i want to confess

I don’t know from where to begin and how to begin

the truth of my black past

Father since my birth i don’t know where are my parents ?

I was born and bought up in a orphanage

I always wanted to lead a rich and glamorous life

I always felt jealous to other people ,

Why they were leading a good life and food

and i was -deprived of every thing

One day i ran away from orphanage and

I made my own world

the world of crime and every thing bad

I just wanted to earn money

I just wanted to prove the word small

I just wanted to prove me the biggest

And for that i was ready to do anything

Anything , any crime , anything worst

Father i have crossed every limit

How many crimes i have done i can’t count on fingers

How many homes i have destroyed , count less

Father please show me the path

When i look back

I am shocked , i am surprised with me

Why i didn’t stop myself

Why no one stooped me

Why i didn’t understand that

Some day i will repent for it.

Was it my fate ?

Is it my destiny ?

Why all those things today i can under stand ,

But i fate , destiny , pathdidn’t understand before

What is my fate father ?

Please help me father ,

Please show me the path father

Please show me the path…

Please…

Please

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CHIPMUNK on Nov 4, 2011
sounds a good way to go
naruto100 on Nov 4, 2011
Well written !!
Prakash Vaghela on Nov 4, 2011
nice sharing
lovinglyoursjuny on Nov 4, 2011
Good thoughts and well written
willie wondka on Nov 4, 2011
sometimes these people try not to get too involved these days.
aisha jamal on Nov 4, 2011
thoughtful!
girishpuri on Nov 4, 2011
thanks
Saurav Banerjee on Nov 4, 2011
Moving confession!!!
pattiann on Nov 4, 2011
Fantastic! I never thought a criminal would go to confession. I love how you phrased it!
nurzaira on Nov 4, 2011
hemmm.. well written
Eliza26 on Nov 4, 2011
An interesting piece of poetry.
ImKarn23 on Nov 4, 2011
it sounds to me as if you have found your own path to self acceptance.
Keep walking it – with or without support..
Try to remember that many of us walk a sad and lonely path!
yes me on Nov 4, 2011
Good for you cheers
LoveDoctor on Nov 4, 2011
A very sincere post. It’s never too late to learn from your mistakes and start over.
Eunice Tan on Nov 4, 2011
Good and honest.
ittech on Nov 4, 2011
hahah nice poetry
lapasan on Nov 5, 2011
We should just forget our unpleasant past.
CutezSoNia on Nov 5, 2011
really good…
aheed411 on Nov 5, 2011
Thanks for the reminder
papaleng on Nov 5, 2011
everyone is entitled to a new beginning. nice piece.
FX777222999 on Nov 5, 2011
Nice start for a new endeavor.
SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 5, 2011
We can start over.
zulfikar on Nov 5, 2011
excellent piece of work. confession is one way of making your mind peaceful.
gaby7 on Nov 5, 2011
This is a poignant piece here buddy! Such is life!
erwinkennythomas on Nov 5, 2011
powerful!
Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Nov 5, 2011
Good piece of writing
mtrguanlao on Nov 5, 2011
I like your poem. WE can always change for the better, with the help of our Lord!
ittech on Nov 6, 2011
nice thanks for this
Martin Kloess on Nov 6, 2011
obviously i like this.
reiny on Nov 6, 2011
I think it’s a nice prayer .. you will get the answer soon
Lynn Hollis on Nov 6, 2011
As long as we have life, we have a chance to do better.
DanielD on Nov 7, 2011
Great. For every bad I do hundred goods. Hope God forgives my sins
juliachild on Nov 7, 2011
very intereting
mdrkarim7 on Nov 8, 2011
Nice share indeed.
ittech on Nov 8, 2011
reached here thanks
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 8, 2011
Thanks for the read.
realityspeaks on Nov 9, 2011
Beautifully written
multiplenews on Nov 10, 2011
Very finely written poem.
Sneha... on Nov 18, 2011
Confession makes us feel light and happy. very nicely written!!
tnvrstar on Nov 18, 2011
All of us should clean the black past . Nice poem
bolive on Nov 19, 2011
wonderful share!
Franwrihot82 on Nov 26, 2011
Well I’m sure everyone have a dark past. Thats why we should look forward and make sure the future isnt as dark.
scheng1 on Nov 27, 2011
Usually the ghosts from the past will return when we are old.
nurzaira on Dec 26, 2011
emm nice

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