Why does rain delight?

Washing away with rain,

I heard her voice.

The rain told me all without words .

With all her musical drops.

Then I perceived,

One day it was I who was the rain,

The sun , the moon.

They  were me.

Who else they might be!

Who else might they be?

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  • avissado on Oct 6, 2012

    wonderfully expressed. really liked your lines. cheers

  • Kai Vicky on Oct 6, 2012

    Nice poem.

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  • elee on Oct 6, 2012

    writing is very good Congrats, to you * :)

  • cefibebeb on Oct 6, 2012

    very Nice Poem :)

  • Moses Ingram on Oct 6, 2012

    I liked that! Thank you for sharing.

  • FastWriter680 on Oct 6, 2012

    very meaningful words….

  • Kristie Claar on Oct 6, 2012

    good work

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Oct 6, 2012

    love the pics and the poem,thanks friend :)

  • Martin Kloess on Oct 6, 2012

    Thank you for this.

  • Robin L on Oct 7, 2012

    Thanks for sharing:)

  • girishpuri on Oct 8, 2012

    beautiful share

  • Tiki33 on Oct 31, 2012

    Bravo! I really love this piece. You have done an excellent job.

  • rborman on Nov 4, 2012

    Good work.

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