….

I told myself to be good

as I think I should

I don’t like to be rude

But some people around are so crude

Make my heart disheartened and no mood

Why didn’t they put people in their plight?

We are all struggling in doing things right

With efforts in putting in all our might

They still cause us to have sleepless night

My strength is now light

You can tell from my anguishing sight

However don’t worry, tomorrow I will be alright!

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  • Themax on Dec 4, 2009

    Beautiful and saddy poem,Hey mate please don’t sad take our strength!
    Please smile :)

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  • Darla Cooke on Dec 4, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • AlmaG on Dec 4, 2009

    I always tell myself that everyday :) Great post StarP.

  • Mr Ghaz on Dec 4, 2009

    Excellent one! very well-written poem. Nice words too. keep it up my friend..cheers 8) 8)

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 5, 2009

    I hope so. Please take care

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 5, 2009

    A sad but well written piece.

    Christine

  • CA Johnson on Dec 6, 2009

    This is great. I have felt the same way as you with people that I have come across.

  • fragile18 on Dec 6, 2009

    lovely poem!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 9, 2009

    nice

  • ladydryle on Dec 11, 2009

    beautifully written…nice one..

  • LCM Linda on Jul 8, 2011

    Star, I enjoy this poem very much. Life is full of ups and downs, love and pain. Hope everyone will still be alright at the depression period.

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