I will never forget this day
because this was my hostel’s first b’day.


I entered my room with little steps
golden lights filled those gaps

candles lightening made my way
friends all came and took me away

with good wishes,i cutted my cake..
friends wished and nothing was fake

made some clicks
had some kicks

with cake icing on my face
birthday seemed 2 have a pace

i will never forget this day
because  this was my hostel’s first birthday

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  • Tanya on Oct 19, 2010

    Cute one! :)

    I will also never forget this day coz my cousin’s kidz (Twins) birthday!

    Sincerely
    Tanya

  • strategy03 on Oct 19, 2010

    Wonderful write.

  • Francois Hagnere on Oct 21, 2010

    A great share. Thank you.

  • lovestar on Oct 26, 2010

    thanx friends

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