Stand…

If you can’t help me

Move out of my way

Don’t try to break me

I have too many races to run

Too many miles ahead of me

Please don’t try to stop me

Get out of my way

I will not be broken

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  • PSingh1990 on Nov 2, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • pattiann on Nov 2, 2010

    I really like this. “I will not be broken” will become my mom and I new slogan. Thanks for helping us!

  • Brewed Coffee on Nov 3, 2010

    Strong and very heartfelt sentiments. I like this!

  • Rehoboth on Nov 3, 2010

    nice

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 3, 2010

    You go girl! This piece really lifted me up, Shirley. Thank you.

  • giftarist on Nov 3, 2010

    This sure has a firm foundation, my friend.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 3, 2010

    great share

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 3, 2010

    Good attitude,

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 3, 2010

    I can feel your determination and conviction.

  • treasures306 on Nov 4, 2010

    Excellent prose- Don’t let anyone or anything hold you back. Kudos !

  • crisdiwata on Nov 8, 2010

    Very uplifting!

  • Luna Morena on Nov 16, 2010

    Powerful poem. We should never let anyone to broke us.

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