I Will Not Give in

Poetic Enigma on May 8, 2009

Tags: change, compete, Defeat, giving in, giving up, hanging in there, keeping on, Life, Poetry, race, starting now, weight loss, win

A poem about not giving up even when things seem to be too hard.

Another day,
and I swear I could combust
I am doing my best,
I’m working my hardest to adjust
but changing is not always
the easiest thing to do
It takes a lot of will power
Just to get through
but this time I will make,
I will not give up
If I remember,
Each day just change a little
and that is enough
This is not a race
I’m not going to compete
In the end,
It is the battle of weight that I will defeat
So no,
I will not give in
Starting now,
I am going to win

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HatedNation on May 8, 2009
You go girl!
lol..I mean, You can do it, I know you can.
Christine Ramsay on May 9, 2009
You certainly are going to win. You will not be defeated this time. Keep making this affirmation and it should carry you through.

Christine
kate smedley on May 9, 2009
We are all with you so you will win, just keep going … every day is another small step which will soon turn into giant strides.
poet09 on May 9, 2009
Stay focused and keep your eyes on the prize (you) My prayers are with you. You need to know that your writings are influential to others who are struggling with life as well. So stay strong, Love you.
ladybaby on May 9, 2009
Good poem full of DETERMINATION!
STEVE666 on May 9, 2009
Positive stuff. Hope you achieve your goal.
scout on May 10, 2009
Keep being positive and your goal will be achieved.
SAYING IT IS IN TIME DOING IT AND LIVING IT. GOOD LUCK
Tim Roberts on May 12, 2009
fantastic poems stay upbeat and keep writing your thoughts x all the best
pingamormn on May 13, 2009
I enjoyed the couplet at the end

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