I Wish

Teves on Nov 11, 2009

Tags: Cheer and Support, organizations., philanthropy, wish upon a star

Wishes.

I wish I were your boyfriend,
So you would hold me tight.
I wish I were invisible,
So i could watch you everyday.
I wish I was the sun,
So I could warm you with my kisses.
I’d wish upon a star,
To have just one wish come true,
I wish I could be with you forever.

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Tanya Wallace on Nov 11, 2009
This was a very romantic, heartfelt and sweet poem!Very creative work Teves!You definately have my like!
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 11, 2009
I wish that your wishes comes true.
Frances Lawrence on Nov 11, 2009
That is a very nice poem
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 11, 2009
your imagery is good

if wishes were horses

wishes would come true

but as a son

i wish you luck

how i wish

your wish could come true

good luck to you
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 11, 2009
nice one.
Jane Benitez on Nov 11, 2009
Teves, you are such a romantic person – I love it! Beautiful poem.
Diverseblogger on Nov 11, 2009
What a romantic piece Very good poem
Joie Schmidt on Nov 11, 2009
I LOVE* it – so refreshingly pure!!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Hansika on Nov 11, 2009
very nice poetry…thanks for the share…keep writing
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 11, 2009
may all ur wish come true….
wonder on Nov 12, 2009
Pray to the sun moon and star, the’ll look after you forever.
Linda Lori on Nov 12, 2009
Nice poem!
Christine Ramsay on Nov 12, 2009
I hope your wish comes true. Lovely work.

Christine
Starpisces on Nov 12, 2009
Teves, your wish will come true..
This poem though simple but is successful, especially the ending part, which is the most important portion, as it is usually the ending part which makes a poem touching to read..
very good.
Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009
Lovely poem!
Judi Eddy on Nov 12, 2009
Just close your eyes and wish Judi x
mathurans on Nov 12, 2009
Nice one
stephanieortiz on Nov 12, 2009
Nice Poem…just be persistent and your wish will come true.
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Nov 12, 2009
Beautifully written, filled with love and desire. Awesome
Webiny on Nov 12, 2009
nice poetry with a powerful message. it so beautifully composed, too. =)
chantell on Nov 12, 2009
Standing Ovation
LovelyWolf on Nov 13, 2009
It’s been a while since I’ve seen a love poem, great write, that was refreshing!
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009
how sweet and tender.

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