Wishes.

I wish I were your boyfriend,
So you would hold me tight.
I wish I were invisible,
So i could watch you everyday.
I wish I was the sun,
So I could warm you with my kisses.
I’d wish upon a star,
To have just one wish come true,
 I wish I could be with you forever.

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  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 11, 2009

    This was a very romantic, heartfelt and sweet poem!Very creative work Teves!You definately have my like!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 11, 2009

    I wish that your wishes comes true.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 11, 2009

    That is a very nice poem

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 11, 2009

    your imagery is good

    if wishes were horses

    wishes would come true

    but as a son

    i wish you luck

    how i wish

    your wish could come true

    good luck to you

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 11, 2009

    nice one.

  • Jane Benitez on Nov 11, 2009

    Teves, you are such a romantic person – I love it! Beautiful poem.

  • Diverseblogger on Nov 11, 2009

    What a romantic piece Very good poem

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 11, 2009

    I LOVE* it – so refreshingly pure!!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Hansika on Nov 11, 2009

    very nice poetry…thanks for the share…keep writing

  • Sunitha Stalin on Nov 11, 2009

    may all ur wish come true….

  • wonder on Nov 12, 2009

    Pray to the sun moon and star, the’ll look after you forever.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 12, 2009

    I hope your wish comes true. Lovely work.

    Christine

  • Starpisces on Nov 12, 2009

    Teves, your wish will come true..
    This poem though simple but is successful, especially the ending part, which is the most important portion, as it is usually the ending part which makes a poem touching to read..
    very good.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Judi Eddy on Nov 12, 2009

    Just close your eyes and wish Judi x

  • mathurans on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice one

  • stephanieortiz on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice Poem…just be persistent and your wish will come true.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Nov 12, 2009

    Beautifully written, filled with love and desire. Awesome

  • Webiny on Nov 12, 2009

    nice poetry with a powerful message. it so beautifully composed, too. =)

  • chantell on Nov 12, 2009

    :) Standing Ovation :)

  • LovelyWolf on Nov 13, 2009

    It’s been a while since I’ve seen a love poem, great write, that was refreshing!

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009

    how sweet and tender.

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