Awesome imagery. I love to sleep too. Well-done.

@ L..D.

Hmmmmmmh, me no.

u r indeed awesome my dear
your imagery i so endear ,
that your words
took me back in time
once upon a time ,
was the ship
TITANIC,
none slept owing to the panic ,
none wept
for nothing could be done,
greed over came some
and
then ere the Titanic sank t
They too had been done

sleep my friend ,
for tomorrow will come
and when you awake
my life would have become .

Beauty Poem – but ain’t no one drowning you in the waves.

You are funny Elena I never thought I would hear you Ms. use the word “aint”

deep thoughts. great poem

Once I smashed my thumb so bad I only wanted to sleep; anything else would involve pain.

This poem touched on some of my still raw nerves. I have suffered depression on and off for the last 19 years or so. I just wanted to sleep all the time just to hide away from life. I also used to dream or think about laying in a river with water flowing over my head until I was no more. Very deep poem Jerry.

Thanks Kaye and Lew.

@ LillRose, keep the faith and take solace in the fact that others feel the same way you do.

Nice poem.

Very nice way to describe escape.

Something profound and deep…. All I want when I fall asleep is to be surrounded by the people I love the most in life with a hope of seeing them in my world beyond mortal reality…

Thanks for commenting Adrian and Anna.

I’m with Lilly, I sleep as much as possible to escape reality. I love to dream and create my own world. Your poem brought these feelings to mind, enjoyed it.

Absolutely brilliant, well written and imaginative keep up the good workx

Thanks Naturechild02!

Thank you especially Ms,. Lowry