I Wonder Where You are

Starpisces on Mar 20, 2011

Tags: belly dance, Curry, Good Friends, hot, Sari, spicy, wonder

Just a short poem to say to my very first commenter, Wonder, a great friend and fan (If I’m not mistaken, from India).
She writes nice poetry, paints nice pictures and most importantly, a great supporter to my articles, since day one I joined Triond in September 2009.
Watch out friends, you may be the next character of my poems.

Wonder, I wonder where you are

You took a break to somewhere far

I know you will return again to this site

Just like me, this is a site that you like

You are my very first commenter

Though you clicked on my third article

“Friends come, friends go” was the post

Yet you always go but come back, I know

I was very new to Triond just tried my luck

Thought no one will read any at the start

But because of your click with the “liked it”

I stay till today, it seems like a great magic

Each time you disappear, very long time I notice

But when you return, you always remember me

You will read almost all my post at one breath

Add on to the fun with your humorous comments

Wonder, this round you disappear again so long

Remember to return and write poem or song

I have two favour to ask and hope you agree

That is to lend me your beautiful yellow sari

I wish to learn belly dance to firm my nice belly

If you come Singapore, I will get the sari from thee

Also, to teach me cook some hot and spicy curry

As I am a hot person, who is now quite hungry

my recent post :

http://authspot.com/poetry/outside-the-hospital-building/

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Comments (29)

Mr Ghaz on Mar 20, 2011
I’m still here my friend!..just waiting for better luck @ Triond…cool piece as always. cheers
SharifaMcFarlane on Mar 20, 2011
Wonder is a real source of support and encouragement. I hope wherever she is, her days are filled with happiness.
A lovely tribute Star.
sgkeat on Mar 20, 2011
let me know when you start belly dancing…I should be near enough to appreciate…hehe..while eating the nice hot spicy curry…with french kiss?….i mean french loaf?
V rank on Mar 20, 2011
very powerful piece.
Brewed Coffee on Mar 20, 2011
What a nice way to appreciate an old friend in Triond. I have had those kinds of friends here as well. Some have been away from Triond but I hope they do come back. They are also the ones who encouraged me at the start.
PR Mace on Mar 20, 2011
That was wonderful. Can I be in your next poem?
Likha on Mar 20, 2011
I hope Wonder won’t keep you wondering for long. You are such a thoughtful friend, star. My first commenter and sweet friend is also not around anymore. Calling JONI KEITH….. (sorry, I had to call from your page).
LCM Linda on Mar 20, 2011
Star, lovely poem. Though I don’t know Wonder, I hope she will come back to you the soonest.
galore on Mar 20, 2011
nice one, Thanks
Eunice Tan on Mar 20, 2011
I do hope Wonder will be back
Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 21, 2011
I also wonder where the philosophical wonder is but she did talk about being a little busy sometimes back.
Lady Sunshine on Mar 21, 2011
Such a lovely piece to your Triond friend. Hope she sees this. ^_^
Anuradha Ramkumar on Mar 21, 2011
I’m sure Wonder would return back. So nice of you to write a poem to show your gratitude for her.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 21, 2011
I haven’t seen Wonder around for a long time. I hope you get your wish for her return. A lovely tribute.
panjettan5 on Mar 21, 2011
nice one…
anndavey650 on Mar 21, 2011
Aww that’s lovely… she must be very special.
Dreamy777 on Mar 21, 2011
Great read
Jewelstar on Mar 21, 2011
Such a cuuuute poem to the one who mean so much to you on Triond.

Me too….getting so much occupied with work. Now I have to catch up with all my friends post to place my valuable comments and….. start to blast my very own posts
Michal Dorcak on Mar 21, 2011
Nice tribute to that person
haydenise on Mar 21, 2011
This is such a nice poem for your Triond friend
Sharif Ishnin on Mar 22, 2011
Wonder and Star makes up the song Twinkle twinkle Little Star.
No wonder you are good friends. Hopes she comes back soon. Curry and bellydancing is also a great combo. After eat curry do the belly! lol.^_^
J M Lennox on Mar 22, 2011
A lovely tribute Star. I love Sharif’s comment too.
papaleng on Mar 23, 2011
Ah, that was such a very humbling tribute to your first commenter.
T. S. Lewis on Mar 23, 2011
Nice tribute to your first fan.
gaby7 on Mar 23, 2011
Yeah, triond is a place where people come in and walk out!
wonder on Mar 24, 2011
I wonder where she is.
Starpisces on Mar 25, 2011
yes, wonder, I wonder where is wonder… lol…
welcome on board, wonder…hehehe.
Melody SJAL on Mar 26, 2011
What a nice tribute.
CA Johnson on Mar 28, 2011
That was a beautiful tribute to wonder. Wonder is such a great and supportive friend and I think you did a great tribute.

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