Dear ,common cheer up ,hey life is so beautiful ! just look up to the sky ,the birds are flying so freely and happy ,. No one cares for them , how much more with us ,many cares , and am one of them… Smile ….

Very powerful words.

common cheer up my friend… let smile together..

This poem got me thinking of Plato’s “Allegory of the Cave” The actual story of the cave can be read in Plato’s “The Republic”. Love the pics again too. &)

You can’t live in the past it’s not healthy.

There was a time, when I was a child, when both my parents had died and I was sent away to live on a farm. I was content to live with the cattle because I did not want to participate in human affairs. I wanted to wallow in my own grief. The cows were at peace and welcomed me. They were a great comfort to me. But then, my uncle, the farmer, died in his sleep and after year my Aunt remarried. The cattle were slaughtered and the farm dissolved before my very eyes. My much older brother took me to his house where I lived in the basement and tried to stay away from hie wife who did not want me there. I still wallowed in my grief and waited for bad to become good. But, by and by, the grief became mud and I was still alive, wallowing in the mud. I had lost some years there while I wallowed and I had become morbid and morose. I soon learned that the world not care if it lost a child, now a young man. I did not like the mod anymore. Mud was not what my parents expected of me. Mud was not what I expected of myself. I wanted the grass and the sky where, as Angelji says, ” the birds are flying freely and happy”. It all took time and some pain but the mud washed off and the sun warmed my skin and the grass felt good under my feet. It was not so much a revolution as it was an evolution to some thing not controlled by the past. The dead past buried it’s dead.

are you only 16? I thought Triond only allowed writers 18 and above?

I like the phrase “disloyal branches of vicious trees.” Good to see you back.

nice……………

@avissado ya I’m only 16:) and wretched

I like this,, very touching

never be afraid ….’coz there is victory ahead of fear

aroosa i perfectly understand you. i am not too good right now but i hope some day, some day will be better. i wish that you will be happy. just look for happiness on right places

really nice image..i like it

Very powerful words.

Seems like you’ve done a lot of self-exploring. NIce.

I believe a good writer wins when every one feels the agony , here you win brave Aroosa , victorious writing , full marks to you…

this takes me back 10 yrs from now…when i was 16, I am 26 now and i use to feel the same, lonely, betrayed and sometimes hopeless….my feelings today @ 26 is no different from ten yrs back ..the only one difference today i feel is getting used to these kind of feelings….this is perhaps making me stronger or may be killing me from inside, never mind my dear sweet poetess, the life of an artist is like that only…u painted very well ur feelings…aah my feelings too

Hey Aroosa, there’s always a way out. Being caught in the past is something we cannot help. Leave the past behind. You will find your way.

We all face our inner phantoms and feel low at a time, however, we must look at the bright side of the world

good to have you back

haunting! rejoice! life is beautiful!

Get out of your cave and into the sunshine, You are too young to be sad and gloomy. I know it can b e hard but you have to try.

You’re wearing your heart on your sleeve, Aroosa – and that’s a good start to get all of the sadness onto the outside to help make it all go away.
I hope you’re on the road to happiness now my friend. nice to see a new post from my lovely Aroosa.

Well well well… what a poem!

Nice share

There’s still a lot that life has to offer. Don’t give up so easily, cheer up.

nice article..but…what was said by angie and amosthecat … I strongly agree….

I like image

I remember when I was 16. Life looked so dark. I was sure nothing good will come out of me. But I “Hold on”. And today I have good life & I’m happy. So true – I probably won’t be remember in human history as someone who changes great things – but I enjoy my life – and I try to help & make life better at my small scale.

So cheer up. We can’t all be everything we want, but it doesn’t mean we can’t try and enjoy the way.

again there

nice share

I was on the bad situation some years ago. like you, I felt as if no way out, world was dark. And I survive. So, don’t give up! Life is beautiful. There’s so many things you can do.

Very nice ,keep up the good work.

of course, remembering of the past will help you mend or change what has been wronged. don’t give up. life is always full of drama without them we are not complete. LIVE lively.

Very touching and moving.

Interesting???

great

This is a very good work but sad. Things will get better and every thing that you go through, you can learn something. Whether we know it or not, there is a lesson in everything no matter how big or small. There is always hope even when we don’t think there could be. Keep your chin up. Things will get better.

very sad, but interesting piece of work, i have to admit.

Its time to move on to better events

Past is past and looking forward in the future.

nice share

Be happy. You are very talented Aroosa.

i like it!

I like it

oh good to know this…:)

Very well stated

Awesome

great collections of pictures you’ve got there… you seems very good at drawing too ^_^

beautiful

very sad.. i wish u will be happy

like pictures

good share

Do not afraid to change yourself, whatever you feel that you need to.

I can relate to this especially when I was age 16, life may not be in your control, and you are not sure where it will take you, seems everybody is out and about having a better time of it, but as time goes on, and you find yourself, stable, and sure, than life moves in a better directions. Good poem with a lot feeling! Like it!

once again good

again here