Letting go is simply freeing the ones we love but it doesn’t mean we have to stop loving them.
A poem dedicated to somebody who means so much to me, but who has a heart of stone. You will always have a special place in my heart, though you’re like a statue.

The day my heart died

Was when I saw you run your fingers through her hair

I felt an unusual pain

I have never felt like it before

I guess I was jealous

I really don’t understand why?

Does it mean I’m still in love with you?

Each move you make is tainted with lies

Go on keep going

Conceal every bit of emotion you have inside

Lie for their sake

Let’s see whose heart is breaking & aching at night

No matter how much you try

To hide beneath your charming smile

There is a longing inside you which you can’t deny

You LOVE me & you miss me

How you wish I’m by your side

Should it remain just a wish?

Would you not want to make it a reality?

Do yourself a favour

By making your wish come true

Go for it

It has long been granted

Just waiting for you to make a move

Should you have a change of heart

And you felt that your longing for me is gone

You don’t have to worry

No need to feel guilty

Just to see you happy and loving honestly

Is enough for me to let you go

No matter what, I’m just here

Should you need somebody to turn to

Just call me

I will be there

I just said I would let you go

I never said that I would stop loving you……..

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  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 17, 2009

    Oh moniquemenorca, Your poem is beautifully composed as you write with such strong emotions. It is my pleasure to read this from you as I Thank You so much for sharing your gift of writing with us all…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • moniquemenorca on Dec 19, 2009

    Thanks so much for your very kind and inspiring comment.

    I also like your writing style. I started writing when I was 8 years old I guess I could not get it out of my system. I am a born writer. I just love writing, it feels like oxygen to me. When I write I put my heart & soul into it, just like you.

    My wish is to be a professional writer & become well known like you. I would like my unique style of writing become my trade mark.

    I am happy everytime I receive comments appreciating my work.

    Thank you ever so much. It is indeed greatly appreciated.

  • FOREVER POETRY on Jan 13, 2010

    lol, i think you may be as twisted as i am. first youre jealous cause he’s with another, but then you’re glad he’s at least showing he can love somebody. i think its a very good representation of what we endure when we love somone who has rejected us. first we hate then because they hurt us, but we also feel like we would not want them to experience the same pain we feel. im with you on this one sweets.

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