A little truth behind the myth of Daedalus and Icarus.

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ICARUS

My wings lift me to glory,

Escape from prison vast,

Father said, ‘Fly not high!’

Sun’s heat – the wings won’t last;

I soar up to heaven,

My thrill at being free,

Father’s words now escape,

My mind enraptured, see!

Up to that golden orb,

Giver of life to all,

I lift – I fly onward,

Oblivious to call;

At first I do not feel,

The fading warmth on me,

But then I hear a crack,

My wing’s wax I do see;

It is not warm at all,

The sun is cold up here,

Father – it is all wrong,

No heat, but cold to fear!

I look below my height,

See father way below,

He can not hear me now,

No chance that he will know;

My wings are breaking off,

I know my time has passed,

When father, you live on,

Know that my die was cast;

To soar and seek with gods,

My dream and father’s too,

Was but mere stroke of luck,

Up here in heaven’s blue.

PTR November 19, 2010

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  • V rank on Nov 19, 2010

    this is very interesting topic…

  • Angela Ohm on Nov 19, 2010

    Wonderful poem ! Thank you :)

    Angela

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 19, 2010

    Very lovely work.

  • The Soul Explorer on Nov 20, 2010

    Nice one!

  • Adrn0919 on Nov 20, 2010

    I use to love reading mythology. nice work.

  • papaleng on Nov 21, 2010

    well-composed piece and nice lines.

  • sha4nny on Nov 22, 2010

    Everyone knew this, but you are the first to point out the fact of the melting wax is not fact. Great poem!

  • Sandra Tapia on Nov 23, 2010

    Dreamers should always soar no matter what the cost. It is failure must always accompany success, it is inevitable. I enjoyed it greatly.

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