A mother buys her son an ice cream cone because he failed to make the basketball team. She ended up failing with him that day, because she decided to buy herself one too, when she should be watching her weight. She viewed them as "two peas in a pod."

Sunlight shining on my ice cream

Oh! I felt that it was a dream

Because I failed to make it

On our basketball team

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Yes, there was so much cream

That it made me beam

About this joy that made me

Just want to scream

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You see my mother

Told me not to bother

Because I didn’t get

To play this sport

And comforted me

In my disappointment

-

Because of that

She brought me

To Dairy Queen

As my sinking heart

Was being torn apart

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It was a delight

And my surprise

To end up with a treat

Saturated with chocolate sprinklers

That was so scrumptious

Delicious and neat

-

With my ice cream cone

I reached up to let my mom

Sample my surprise

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She loved it so much

That she couldn’t resist

Ordering another

Although she didn’t wish

To increase her weight further

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Yes, my mother failed today

For she was advised

Not to gain any more weight

But she couldn’t resist

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Failing with me

She said, “We’re two peas in a pod”

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  • momofplenty on May 15, 2012

    Awe… these ‘peas in a pod’ are winners in my eyes.

  • lauralu on May 15, 2012

    Wondeful, when my Mom would take me for my booster needles she would say “now Laura if you don’t cry you will have a chocolate popsicle”
    I screamed bl..dy murder and I still got that popsicle lol

  • pattiann on May 15, 2012

    Beautiful. I loved the rhymes. I can understand how she should not be getting icecream because she is watching her weight. I, myself am watching my weight.

  • Martin Kloess on May 15, 2012

    very good

  • Lynn Proctor on May 15, 2012

    Occasionally I will crave bad food (like a Coke or chocolate ice cream) if I am stressed or had a bad day. Normally I don’t eat either one of those. Unfortunately it does nothing to help my weight issue. Maybe if we didn’t turn to unhealthy food when we felt bad, and did something else instead, like go for a walk, or go to the beach, it would help us feel better and be better for us. Sometimes I will grab the lawn mower and take it out on the grass.

  • Eunike on May 15, 2012

    Almost everyman like ice cream

  • AINIEE on May 16, 2012

    great share…

  • vijayanths on May 16, 2012

    nice.

  • Kharla Jolly on May 16, 2012

    Dairy Queen always has a healing effect on kids, whether dealing with a good or a bad experience! It’s common to see both baseball teams(winner and loser)in our Dairy Queen after a tough game, enjoying ice cream together!

  • Safa on May 19, 2012

    Ice-cream..what a wonderful delight..nicely composed sir..thumbs up..

  • yes me on May 20, 2012

    Nice memoirs eRWIN CHEERS

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