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Ice Cream Shop

Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009
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Down the street around the corner,

is my favorite ice cream shop.

Every day I order a sundae,

with chocolate syrup on the top.

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009

    Now that was really short and sweet and enjoyable to look at.

  • Judi Eddy on Nov 10, 2009

    Looks yummy but not for me, im not a sweety person

  • Starpisces on Nov 10, 2009

    straight to the point, good one

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 10, 2009

    I wish I could join you. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    great article…

  • Ramalingam on Nov 10, 2009

    Mouthwatering.I am jealous of you.I don’t have such a shop nearby my house.If there is one, what I will be, I don’t know.Thank you.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 10, 2009

    i always relish ice creams either with chocolate or strawberry syrup on it…lovely picture…

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 10, 2009

    But sometimes too they give an ice cream headache and, for you ladies, they go directly to your hips. Don’t you just love a man’s point of view. Spoil sport.

  • Themax on Nov 10, 2009

    I Scream, You Scream, We All Scream for Ice Cream!!
    Love chocolate,love ice creams and love your sweet poem :)

  • Jamie Myles on Nov 10, 2009

    Oh, now I want some ice cream!

  • Sourav on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice write

  • Goodselfme on Nov 10, 2009

    Good play on the words here, my friend.

  • STEVE666 on Nov 10, 2009

    Funny! Watch your weight, Darla!

  • cardy on Nov 10, 2009

    Very nice work I want ice cream now loved the write!!

  • Teves on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice share…

  • Milton H Peebles III on Nov 10, 2009

    U just made me HUNGRY for ice cream
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 11, 2009

    My daughter’s favorite

  • 9rty Agisti on Nov 11, 2009

    Mmmh … I like & love ice cream.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 12, 2009

    I really liked your poem. I wish I could go with you to the ice cream shop. LOL!

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