Idioms if you don’t know are sayings that are pass the literal meaning of the actual word or phrase. This is an old poem I wrote a long time ago back in middle school and I would like some positve and negative feedback for future reference.

When I first preformed I did it for kicks.

After awhile I was heading for the big leagues.

I was so excited I could not keep my shirt on

Next thing you know I’m an instant classic.

The paparazzi is watching me 24 seven watching my every move.

Besides the stalking people, famous has its positives.

It has its perks like I make a killing.

I was like a god to my fans.

I bet I’m more famous then history itself.

This is my seventh heaven.

Who said the first hundred years were the hardest?

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  • john doe on Jan 23, 2012

    can anybody give me an example of an idiomd poem???? it would be greatly appreciated… if you could comment one ASAP that would be GREAT! Thanks! :)

  • john doe on Jan 23, 2012

    :( im sorry you guys i didnt realize that there was a poetry thing… thanks anyway :/

    :)

  • john doe on Jan 23, 2012

    ;( :( :) ;) <3 haha i love that it changes some of the symbols!

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