Idol Chatter

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Dec 18, 2010

Tags: Poetry

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Double entendre much?

In between the idle chatter

The former

The eventual latter

Weaves the truer tale of

Failures daughter

Tossed hither than thither

Ineffectually scattered

By an excuse wealthy Father

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Comments (17)

learnandearn on Dec 18, 2010
that’s a really nice one my friend .. enjoyed reading
Cuissade Mission on Dec 18, 2010
Interesting…
awesome11 on Dec 18, 2010
greatb article friends
strategy03 on Dec 18, 2010
good or excellent
Kopykween on Dec 18, 2010
I liked your play of words.
UncleSam on Dec 18, 2010
Nice post
CHIPMUNK on Dec 18, 2010
thanks for sharing
gaby7 on Dec 18, 2010
Very intelligently written Poem! I liked the use of words here!
yes me on Dec 18, 2010
liked it cheers
LadyElena on Dec 18, 2010
Nice read.
Adrn0919 on Dec 18, 2010
Nicely written.
PSingh1990 on Dec 18, 2010
Nice Share.
Love Nancy on Dec 18, 2010
Good Post.

Thanks for share.
yresh12 on Dec 20, 2010
love your work
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Dec 25, 2010
Thanks guys for your comments. Each and all.
Butterfly Musings on Dec 27, 2010
Nice rhyme and flow
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 4, 2011
Thanks Cassie

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