Just putting my feelings out and thinking how good it would be…. "If I Could Do Anything At All!.."
Hehe!!!… ^^

I sometimes sit and think,

If I could do anything at all,

I would pull, pull, pull,

And make myself tall!

I would change myself into rubber,

So that I could take any shape,

And become a superhero,

And put on a long red cape!

I would fly over the oceans,

Cross clouds, white and big,

And if I wanted long hair or short,

I wouldn’t ever need a wig!

I would then make myself invisible,

Without using an invisibility cloak,

And go and bother all those people,

Who, sometime, about me might have joked!

I would fly about in my flying car,

And meet all the people I love,

I would call them from their balconies,

And wave at them from above!

As I would be a superhero,

I would always side the good,

And rid the world of all evils,

But hey!.. That’s only if I could!!!…

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  • Raj the Tora on Sep 26, 2010

    hahaha, great post. Lovely entry. Truly appreciate it.

  • drelayaraja on Sep 26, 2010

    Wonderful poem. Great title.

  • zain0077 on Sep 26, 2010

    Great post.

  • My World on Sep 26, 2010

    Nice Post….

    thanks for share.

  • Eric Damato on Sep 26, 2010

    flawless…what a wonderful talent you have.

  • ganeshgolha on Sep 26, 2010

    Good post

  • SuperMember on Sep 26, 2010

    great share!

  • Heather Dawn on Sep 26, 2010

    Love it! Made me smile. : )

  • webseowriters on Sep 26, 2010

    Thanks for sharing

  • Starpisces on Sep 26, 2010

    very fun poem… one day you could, I believe, though may not be all, but most of the things you wish, as you already have my blessing.

    :)

  • Vivek Ratan on Sep 26, 2010

    You can do any thing

    Perhaps many things

    Whole sky is your my dear

    Fly with your emotional wings

    Very nice poem,sasuke

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 26, 2010

    Good POem

  • Kaye TM on Sep 26, 2010

    beautiful poem!

  • Inxxu on Sep 26, 2010

    …only if I could! I have wished kind a things like you did here in your poem…

    Very nice!

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 26, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Sep 27, 2010

    Fun poem and nicely written.

  • Goodselfme on Sep 27, 2010

    WEll done poem with spirit, intensity, inginuity,flair and description. Thank you./

  • sasuke191 on Sep 27, 2010

    Thank you all!!!!….. ^^

  • Eric Damato on Sep 27, 2010

    Masha’Allah! May God bless you with such wonderful talent, if you are actually fourteen then we are looking at the next Bobby Fischer of poetry and if you are not, well, pure genius! God bless you either way your words are incredible!

  • reciel tanaid on Sep 28, 2010

    very nice poem…..

  • sasuke191 on Sep 28, 2010

    I just love the comments!!!… Thanksss soo much!!… ^_^

  • MilMick on Sep 30, 2010

    @@ – nice share. thanks! – @@

  • Joseph Scott on Sep 30, 2010

    Agreed, this is a very good piece. Good work!

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