If I Died Tomorrow

lene21 on Jun 12, 2009

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If I died tomorrow
Would you even care
Would you miss the way I smile
Or the smell of my hair
If I died tomorrow
Would you be to blame
Would you come to the funeral
And hang your head in shame
If I died tomorrow
Is there anything you would want to say
Maybe you love me
Or wanted me to stay
If I died tomorrow
How would you even know
How would you feel
And where would you go
If I died tomorrow
Would you really miss me
Would you miss the times we talked
Or every time you teased me
If I died tomorrow
Would you visit my grave
Would you act like you care
Or laugh at the thought of me down there?

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tim windisch on Jun 12, 2009
I really hope you’re not always in that dark of a mood, but I like the commentary. Nice angle.
ladybaby on Jun 12, 2009
If this is written to someone you love, You would be hurting more than him, if you died tomorrow.
lene21 on Jun 13, 2009
Thank you very much for all you comments. I will check out some of your work.
irishpen on Jun 14, 2009
I think someone who intentionally hurts themselves, hurts those around them, and causes those people endless pain. I don’t think they would laugh. This poem speaks of your pain.

It is very emotional. I wish you ~peace~

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