A quick little sad poem of saying goodbye.

Happier days are appreciated best during sad times
Love pulsates thicker through hardships and tribulation
Beautiful things are seen with eyes closed
And discomfort comes with conversation
We are best heard when we are silent
And best noticed when we’re gone
So if I say goodbye now, you’ll find out how much my presence was meant.

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  • teddybear09 on Mar 21, 2009

    I loved it. Your writing is beautiful

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 22, 2009

    Great work! That was lovely poem! I liked it! Keep it up. Well done and thanx for sharing Tiffany..suggest: add some beautiful pics on top..eyes catching

  • Reilley on Apr 1, 2009

    You are a gifted writer, keep it up.

  • Tate Morgan on Apr 27, 2009

    You as an enlightened one very rare in deed.
    And so very precious Good night dear
    I had a talk with the Almighty.
    He owes me a favor.
    He says he isn\’t busy.
    And would love to help me out.
    So tomorrow is your day.
    Go out on your beautiful hill.
    Stare at the vast expanse.
    As the sun beats down upon your shoulders.
    Warming the soul from within.
    Know you are special.
    As the wind caresses your cheek.
    Know it is I who kissed you.
    Watching over you again.
    Tonight when you sleep.
    May you be rocked tonight.
    Within the arms of the Almighty .
    To the beat of lullaby winds.
    While all the souls of Heaven.
    Play you a song so kind.
    As the Caroling Angels sing!
    Good night Princess Tiffany,
    Most beloved of the Almighty.
    Royal Princess of the Western Lands.
    Friend to the Caroling winds.
    And HOPE OF the WORLD TO ME!
    Your fellow traveler.
    Tate

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